Talk:Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai: Volume 4 Sister

although i said i wouldn't edit, i just couldn't resist the urge. i mainly want to see how good my english is, judging by the number of edits reverted. that being said, for now i'll only change things that i'm very sure are wrong. and i'll always list my reasons like so:

11. hold events, but do things.

135. people = plural, hence lambs.

151. shit, my bad. i'll revert the edit on this.

157. otherwise it makes little sense...

183. it's still a question.

237. an orgy, an oracle, an old man man. a story, a uterus (lol, cause "(y)uterus"), a hero(not to be confused with 4-chan'ian "an hero")

265. it's still a question.

285. thanks to Dark_sage, i now know that this is a comma splice, which are usually bad. another option is "shut up AND die".