Talk:Boku wa Tomodachi ga Sukunai: Volume 4 Sister

although i said i wouldn't edit, i just couldn't resist the urge. i mainly want to see how good my english is, judging by the number of edits reverted. that being said, for now i'll only change things that i'm very sure are wrong. and i'll always list my reasons like so:

11. hold events, but do things. (variant: change things to "events", but this may change the original intended meaning)

135. people = plural, hence lambs.

151. shit, my bad. i'll revert the edit on this.

157. otherwise it makes little sense...

183. it's still a question.

237. an orgy, an oracle, an old man man. a story, a uterus (lol, cause "(y)uterus"), a hero(not to be confused with 4-chan'ian "an hero")

265. it's still a question.

285. thanks to Dark_sage, i now know that this is a comma splice, which are usually bad. another option is "shut up AND die". --Idiffer 11:37, 10 February 2012 (CST)

mmm, most edits are self explanatory, i think (i could be wrong of course).

431. i think forms don't walk. as an aside, do shadows move or walk, for example? (unsure of this. but "walk" still sounds weird, imho. maybe "drift away" or something similar?)

--Idiffer 11:37, 10 February 2012 (CST)

@Dan But Guidline says missonary school instead of mission school... --Darklor 03:33, 16 March 2012 (CDT)