User talk:Demon8796
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Hi, do keep all narrative tense to past tense. (this is about the short story about the 4th.) I'll follow up with a more detailed feedback later this week. --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 09:50, 16 October 2013 (CDT)
Ok, it's fine. 1 thing though, the part about number 4 primogenitor is intentional. So, if you have a good way to say fourth primogenitor without using fourth primogenitor, I'll love to see your suggestion. --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 10:02, 16 October 2013 (CDT)
Yondaime! lol It just seemed kinda off to me. Nothing comes to mind so I guess it'll stay like that. Do you have any reason why you don't want "fourth primogenitor"? Just wondering. Anyway, thanks for the feedback! --Demon8796 (talk) 19:53, 16 October 2013 (CDT)
It's not the same term. So, I'm looking to leave the distinction there too in the translation. --KuroiHikari (Talk | ) 23:46, 16 October 2013 (CDT)
Oh. Hmm, how about "the fourth of the primogenitors"? <--- idiotic opinion. Thanks for translating the light novel! Hope you finish volume one and get started on volume two! :) By the way, I'd like to give the images a try. I was thinking of removing the Japanese characters on the images and replace them with english words. If you could translate those then it'd help. Will inform you if I can manage to do them. --demon8796 (talk) 01:52, 17 October 2013 (CDT)
