Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume4 Prologue
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yeayyyyyyyyyyyyy fourth V is out!!!! it means more translations!!!!! thanks for your hard work^^
Thanks man!! I'm sooo excited right now!
'irritating smell'... 'easily consume my life'... *very curious*
Editing[edit]
Tenses need to be sorted here:
"To me it doesn't look like he had a goal. It looked like he has just been playing with us." <-- this is definitely incorrect. Tenses are mixed up.
"To me it doesn't look like he has a goal. It looks like he has just been playing with us." "To me it didn't look like he had a goal. It looked like he had just been playing with us." "To me it doesn't look like he had a goal. It looks like he had just been playing with us."
Also, perhaps the second 'like' should be replaced with 'as though'. MatrixM (talk) 15:24, 16 July 2013 (CDT)