Difference between revisions of "Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume2 May 2"
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Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT) |
Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | : Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. [[User:MatrixM|MatrixM]] ([[User talk:MatrixM|talk]]) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT) |
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Revision as of 15:31, 15 July 2013
poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!
Very pleasant part regarding the return home on the bike. The 'your relations with your classmates are forever destroyed' part left a bitter taste in my mouth. The 'Aya' part is curious... am I forgetting something important from earlier, or was the information he doesn't have never revealed to us in the first place, putting us in his position in terms of puzzlement? Hmm. Curious to see whether the plotline will be resolved acceptably.
(Same source as last paragraph: have now read the rest! Significant happiness. *smiles*)
EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch... Grrarr (talk) 20:57, 6 May 2013 (CDT)
"That must also be the why" -> "That must also be the reason why" or "That must also be why" MatrixM (talk) 07:36, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P MatrixM (talk) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)
