Talk:Utsuro no Hako:Volume2 May 2

poor him:(i now they want to make him a murderer!!

Very pleasant part regarding the return home on the bike. The 'your relations with your classmates are forever destroyed' part left a bitter taste in my mouth. The 'Aya' part is curious... am I forgetting something important from earlier, or was the information he doesn't have never revealed to us in the first place, putting us in his position in terms of puzzlement? Hmm. Curious to see whether the plotline will be resolved acceptably.

(Same source as last paragraph: have now read the rest! Significant happiness. *smiles*)

EEE: "common law husband" > "de facto husband" ... but it's still pretty clinical. maybe a more liberal edit like "lover" etc would work better? It pops up a lot in this ch... Grrarr (talk) 20:57, 6 May 2013 (CDT)

"That must also be the why" -> "That must also be the reason why" or "That must also be why" MatrixM (talk) 07:36, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

Should Maria be saying 'desperate' instead of 'hopeless' considering how the guy possessing Kazuki never said 'hopeless' out-loud? Or is this another case of her somehow reading his mind? :P MatrixM (talk) 07:46, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

Similar thing here. "Yes ...But may I ask something first?" He doesn't actually follow this with a question. MatrixM (talk) 08:31, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

Good points. I'm not fully convinced if "desperate" really fits in all cases, but should be better than having different kinds of expressions. EusthEnoptEron (talk) 11:43, 15 July 2013 (CDT)

Hi,

I'm dteviot, the person who wrote/updates the Chrome plug-in to convert Baka-Tsuki web pages into EPUB. Anyway, the story Utsuro no Hako:Volume 2, chapters “May 2nd (Saturday) 00:11” and “May 2nd (Saturday) 00:31” are entirely in italics. This appears to be due to an unclosed tag in the first chapter, with a closing tag in the following chapter. I suspect that this is a typo and is probably due to an unclosed tag at the end of the preceeding chapter. Anyway, if the chapters are not supposed to be in italics, you will probably want to remove the tags. If the chapters ARE supposed to be in italics, could you please put an opening and closing tag for each chapter. At the moment, my web to epub converter is removing the tag because it can't match across chapters. Thank you for your time.