Talk:Tasogare-iro no Uta Tsukai:Volume2 Introductory Play
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A few minor edits for typo's, sentence structure, and naming consistency for the chess pieces. One or two sentences I think could use some more work, especially line 85 -"It cut the wind,..."Cres (talk) 09:18, 23 August 2013 (CDT)
Re-translated that ergonomics line, so hopefully that sounds better. For line 85, the meaning is pretty much just that. I think the way you've reworded it sounds fine, but if you can think of a way to make it sound better, go ahead. As always, thanks for your edits! --Mystrael (talk) 13:28, 23 August 2013 (CDT)
