Talk:Seikai no Senki:Volume4 Chapter2(jp)

Discussion for the japanese translation

We have decided to use the chinese version as template and fill in the missing parts from the original japanese version. It's not perfectly authentic like a from the ground up translated japanese version. For previous discussions refer to the chinese translated section on the project main page.--Ushwood 02:31, 7 September 2011 (CDT)

Differences from the chinese-translated version:

- ship name changed from "Kaisofu" to "Kaisof";

- "pickled crane juice" changed to "crane egg soup";

- "tangerine flavored roast pork" changed to just "roasted pork";

- the text correction (missing line added): from

“Then just what type of attitude should I show towards my captain?”

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“Then What kind of manner does the Captain want from me?” Duhir snapped back. “Do I behave as deputy communication officer or should I act as a member of the Imperial family”?

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“However, it is said that the intelligence of the navigation crew determined the engine crew’s positions!”

“I have never heard of this saying in my clan.” Said Duhir.

“I think you may not be especially concerned with the relations?” Berusot said firmly.

“Even if that is so, you cannot bring that into what we are discussing now.” Vonyu said.

“I am not a person to allow business to turn my backs on family tradition!”

“Although saying that is very impolite, but I thought that as captain chances for me to display my family tradition should be miniscule.”

“If this is truly the captain’s family tradition, then it would be too much for anyone to respect it.” Vonyu said in a tone full of misgiving.

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“However, it is said, that intelligence determines whether a person belongs to the navigation crew or engine crew.”

“I have never heard of this saying in my family.” Said Duhir.

“Perhaps, you didn't take note of it.” Berusot asserted.

“Even so, the circumstances here are different.” Vonyu said.

“As if I would neglect family tradition because of circumstances.”

“With all due respect, Captain, in your position the opportunity to show your family tradition should be rare.” Vonyu said coldly.

“So what? Just because there is no opportunity, decay is not a tradition in our family tradition.”

“If this is truly the captain’s house's family tradition, it would be so- splendid.” Vonyu said in a tone full of misgiving.

- the text correction (missing line added): from

“No, actually you were not rude at all just now.” Berusot said with a malicious laugh.

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“No, actually you were not rude at all just now.” Berusot said with a malicious laugh. “Naturally, this is to be expected from an ambitious Line Wing Officer.”

- the text correction (missing lines added): from

The spatial sensors’ image and Kaisofu’s image overlaps completely, Duhir is only pretending to control the ship.

As if responding to Duhir’s control, the Kaisofu begins to fire short bursts of thrusters. After that, this Line-of-Battle ship enters into customary navigation.

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The spatial sensors’ image and Kaisof’s image overlaps completely, Duhir is only pretending to control the ship.

Duhir's left hand which was inserted into the control glove moved unconsciously.

Of course, his control glove did not work now. It was only a formality.

As if responding to Duhir’s control, the Kaisof begins to fire short bursts of thrusters. After that, this Line-of-Battle ship enters into customary navigation.--Ushwood 02:48, 7 September 2011 (CDT)