Talk:Kaze no Stigma:Volume2 Chapter 3

@Zyzzyva165 (in response to the his/her comment on their edit after my last edit)

I think that a lot of the text in this page flows oddly and sometimes has a poor choice of words. The meaning gets across but it doesn't flow like it would if it were actually written by a native English speaker. A lot just isn't worded how it would normally be worded in English. I expect that it's a result of it being a fairly direct translation. I attempted to fix it up a bit so that it flowed better. If you think that I went too far, feel free to undo what I did. I don't think that I changed the meaning of anything. I just made it flow better. If the comment on my edit was not clear enough, what would you have preferred that I said?

--Kalessin 4:36, June 7, 2009 (UTC)