Talk:Gate - Thus the JSDF Fought There:Volume1 Prologue

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Just uploaded translation for 2 more pages. Took almost 3 bloody hours to translate that much ~_~ hope it'll go faster as I get used to it... time to sleep. Will appreciate if anyone would check english grammar in it. Neither of thous two languages are my native ones :,( --Sinon (talk) 01:24, 8 December 2012 (CST)

Which is your native language? I was going to say you could dictate to me through Skype and I would write for you, but if English is not your first language, that may prove troublesome. Send me a mail about it, please. I´d really like to help but I don´t know japanese, so this is as much as I can do. Will check the grammar in your translation, as you requested.

doesn't look like there is any activity, but...

"As the sun was approaching it´s zenith, and when it looked like the temperature would reach a new record, in Ginza (central ward of the Tokyo metropolitan area), suddenly a "Gate to Another World" appeared."

Should probably be: "As the sun was approaching it´s zenith, and when it looked like the temperature would reach a new record a "Gate to Another World" suddenly appeared in Ginza (the central ward of the Tokyo metropolitan area).