Talk:Date A Live:Volume 5 Chapter 3
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<And following with the thought of the sound stopping in front of the room, *knock**knock* the door was knocked.> 'thought of the sound stopping?' should it be something like 'following with what she thought was the sound stopping'?
<honestly she was not someone that makes her happy for encountering> encountering? what's this line mean? --Monsterbandage (talk) 22:54, 21 March 2013 (CDT)
1.nothing wrong there. its just the door was knocked together with the sound, thats all.
2.origami was not someone she wants to see or meet.
and next time place a bracket so i can find the text easier <!--(example)--> and something like hidden comment in the summary edit box
--RikiNutcase (talk) 03:42, 22 March 2013 (CDT)
