Talk:CubexCursedxCurious:Volume3 Chapter4

I was wondering about the word 'petrol.' Would that be better switched to 'gasoline?' I know that elsewhere in the world petrol is often used but here in NA you'd almost never hear it. Kory 08:26, 2 June 2013 (CDT)

There is Petro-Canada, but anyway, go ahead and change it to gasoline. --Zzhk (talk) 09:14, 2 June 2013 (CDT)

Huh, I completely forgot about Petro-Canada, kinda odd considering I have one just down the road from me. Also got me thinking because I can't ever remember seeing/hearing a Petro-Can add that actually said petrol in it; only gasoline. Kory 13:37, 2 June 2013 (CDT)

This line seemed a little odd,

Finally, the engine noise could be heard no longer

Would it be better as something along the lines of: Finally, the noise of the engine could no longer be heard Kory 16:25, 6 June 2013 (CDT)

I don't really see much of a difference. --Zzhk (talk) 18:40, 6 June 2013 (CDT)