Talk:CubexCursedxCurious:Volume1 Chapter1

Who's talking here?!

Konoha was the one who was poking my shoulder. She said to Haruaki in an awkward manner;

"I think that in that situation, you have some faults too, you know."

"Why? I can't explain what she did other than playing a prank against me."

"Well, if you try to look at things around you, maybe you'll see what I mean. Try to look over there on the garden. Or at the kitchen"

I tried to look at where she pointed out. It was totally different from how I left them this morning. I still couldn't see anything other than Fear trying to play a-----

"....Huh?.... That girl... was she trying to...?"

Who's talking here? It seems to me that it is reflecting the thought of Haruaki but since the text is written from a third person omniscient narrator perspective. At least most of the rest of the text, it seems weird to me for it to suddenly switch to first person. I was going to replace the "my", by a "his" and all the "I"'s by "He"'s... But I had a doubt... So hope someone will check this and confirm or deny my doubts.--Stealth 17:20, 26 February 2009 (UTC)

Who's talking here?! changes

I went ahead and changed the I's and My's

Konoha was the one who was poking Haruaki's shoulder. She said to Haruaki in an awkward manner;

"I think that in that situation, you have some faults too, you know."

"Why? I can't explain what she did other than playing a prank against me."

"Well, if you try to look at things around you, maybe you'll see what I mean. Try to look over there on the garden. Or at the kitchen"

Haruaki tried to look at where she pointed out. It was totally different from how he left them this morning. He still couldn't see anything other than

Fear trying to play a-----

"....Huh?.... That girl... was she trying to...?"

Cenore

Thanks for the edit

Orz. (^^)b