Talk:Campione!:Volume 8 Chapter5
Hmm, so is this separated from the main story? In a way such that it would be okay to read without reading the previous chapters in the volume without spoiling? Draeke - Talk - 01:24, 18 September 2012 (CDT)
"You know, if you are asked [What have you been doing up till now?], you should say [a part-time job at an old bookstore]. And if I asked [what kind of job? Hmm. How much do they pay?], to which you should reply [moving a large amount of old books in half a day, for 3000 yen]. For [Isn't that too little!?], it should be [That's not the case at all. Isn't that normal?]."
V8C5 edit discussions[edit]
Part 1[edit]
By chance, his workplace was <--at/near--> Toranomon.
Her gesture of gently leaning <--tilting--> her head to the side, really resembled that of an elegant ojou-sama.
Part 2[edit]
The usual gatherings of the Kusanagi household were usually comprised of Godou, his sister Shizuka + <--assuming this is literal translation, plus would be better tho--> their grandfather, just the three of them. The mother was very busy with her work and private affairs and hence was often absent, whereas the father, after the divorce, had separated from the household. <--using "their" instead of "the mother/father" would be much better. Can you recheck the txts? --Chancs -->
Structurally altered <--Renovated/Unconventional?-->it may have been, but with the pure Japanese style of the Kusanagi house, she could not have been said to look in place with it. However, recently, because of her incessant coming in and out of the house, the feeling of being out of place has all but disappeared.
Part 3[edit]
The shopkeeper, who was also the bartender, had said [Although it's a modest business, some way or another I can <--still--> make a living], with no intention of modifying his quiet business style.
"Basically, I've been managing this shop somehow by myself. A child who wants to seriously become a bartender, I do not plan nor have the allowance of taking one as a full-time apprentice. And thus, I just needed someone who would help out when things looked busy. Furthermore ― " <--weird structure to this line, "Basically, I've been managing this shop somehow by myself. Then a child who wants to seriously become a bartender shows up. I didn't plan nor have the allowance to take on a full-time apprentice, but I just needed someone who would help out when things looked busy. Furthermore ― " something like that? -->
Part4[edit]
No matter how much time passes, he had no confidence that he would be able to use Verethragna's authorities. In other words, because they were normal people, the power would not activate. And with that, the chase. <--Thinking back on the chase/ Returning to the chase?-->
