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Basing characters on yourself is a great way to go, especially if you have Dissociative Identity Disorder. Also, there's more of those shameless personal-interest-inserts coming because the second novel is about Shin-tsu joining a band at school.<br> |
Basing characters on yourself is a great way to go, especially if you have Dissociative Identity Disorder. Also, there's more of those shameless personal-interest-inserts coming because the second novel is about Shin-tsu joining a band at school.<br> |
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PS: Go for it! --[[User:Ryuno|Ryuno]]<br> |
PS: Go for it! --[[User:Ryuno|Ryuno]]<br> |
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| − | *i actually haven't slept since my last reply, lol. i've been writing untill morning and then went to work. but i have only written 2 pages (1000 words) about someone eating breakfast.it was fun, but i hoped to write more in 4 hours, lol. <br> i'll wait for future volumes then. i hope you will explain in detail what is happening to Shin-tsu and why he's having these delusions of superpower. and i've also included my hobby in my novel, which really wouldn't seem to fit into the story for a person not familiar with the hobby.<br>about the dissociative identity disorder. <br>1)if you meant that you can use the 2nd identity as a base for the character, there would be the problem of the identities having seperate banks of memory, meaning - you can't know your other identity nearly as well as yours and thus it becomes a poor model. you don't know it's reasoning, logic, desires and so on. so in the end it becomes basing a character on another person and not on yourself, which are two diferent things.<br>2) if you meant that if you had the disorder, you'd use yourself as a base for a character that has the same disorder, then i agree with you.<br>3) your sentence about identity disorder can also imply that you (kyuno) have that disorder. you may not have meant this at all and do not have this disorder, but the english language, just as any other, allows room for misunderstandings, espeacially for us, who speak english as a second language. so please don't be offended. --[[User:Idiffer|Idiffer]] 14:07, 15 October 2010 (UTC) |
+ | *i actually haven't slept since my last reply, lol. i've been writing untill morning and then went to work. but i have only written 2 pages (1000 words) about someone eating breakfast.it was fun, but i hoped to write more in 4 hours, lol. <br> i'll wait for future volumes then. i hope you will explain in detail what is happening to Shin-tsu and why he's having these delusions of superpower. and i've also included my hobby in my novel, which really wouldn't seem to fit into the story for a person not familiar with the hobby.<br>about the dissociative identity disorder. <br>1)if you meant that you can use the 2nd identity as a base for the character, there would be the problem of the identities having seperate banks of memory(you don't remember what you did when the 2nd identity takes control of your body), meaning - you can't know your other identity nearly as well as yours and thus it becomes a poor model. you don't know it's reasoning, logic, desires and so on. so in the end it becomes basing a character on another person and not on yourself, which are two diferent things.<br>2) if you meant that if you had the disorder, you'd use yourself as a base for a character that has the same disorder, then i agree with you.<br>3) your sentence about identity disorder can also imply that you (kyuno) have that disorder. you may not have meant this at all and do not have this disorder, but the english language, just as any other, allows room for misunderstandings, espeacially for us, who speak english as a second language. so please don't be offended. my apologies in advance. --[[User:Idiffer|Idiffer]] 14:07, 15 October 2010 (UTC) |
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--Thelastguardian 21:57, 2 October 2010 (UTC)
- hi. i decided to continue here, as that was the discussion of my novel, not yours. on that discussion page ppl want to read about your novel, if you get what i mean.
anyway. thank you for your advice. although i'm forced to make a compromise. i'll start writing the first chapter in the next few days, if my lazyness decides to take a vacation.(although i don't know for sure where the plot will go after that) but still, i'm not Nabokov, and i cant't just write without thinking out the plot first. for example if i started writing 2 days ago, i would have not included a very important character trait, which i only came up with yesterday. so i would have had to rewrite the whole thing.so i'll wait before writing the 2nd chapter untill i think of the continuation of the plot. also, i enjoy writing down ideas for my novel, even if it will be a whole notebook. PS. i'm getting better at arithmetics thanks to baka-tsuki.
btw does Underground Tower have anything to do with Longing of Shiina Ryou?
--Idiffer 14:06, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
I'd like to see the first chapter when it's done. Also, UT is unrelated to The Longing of Shiina Ryo but directly related to 12:12 -twelfth honor deed-, although that might sound weird. Arithmetics? I'm currently studying probability theory, physics and biology to apply on The Longing of Shiina Ryo. --Ryuno
- okay about 1st chapter. i meant that when you edit pages on baka-tsuki, it asks you to solve problems like 1+2=...and wait, so you have other completed novels? where can i read them? + that's some serious research you are doing. i can imagine the difficulty of applying physics, when the main character can bend time and space. for my novel, i need to re-read some psychology books. i dont intend to have characters behaving in strange ways, like a guy having a harem of girls in love with him, but he can't choose either of them.
also, i've found it to be easy and very pleasing if you base a character on yourself. i've noticed that in your novel too, with the bass guitar for example.
PS. ah, what the hell, i'll start writing now! although it's 1 o'clock at night and i have work tommorow.--Idiffer 20:24, 14 October 2010 (UTC)
Oh, yeah, the math problems when editing! They sure are fun, except when the same ones appear twice in a row.
No, but I have 12:12 -twelfth honor deed-'s game demo. It kind of sucks because we had like, two weeks to get it done (in order to be able to present a seminar on a college event). Still, it's a project I pretty much HAVE to finish because it is connected to the Underground Tower's final arc (by a third story called Sin of the Moon, Punishment of the Sun).
Shin-tsu thinks he was able to bend Space and Time but even in a small place like that warehouse some damage to the surroundings would have been caused by running at the speed Time "stops"; still, he managed to get there just in time to stop Ryo from suffering the damage from the fall. If he has any "power", it's his unstoppable hot-bloodness in times of need. He just needs to stop acting like a wuss and start fighting his own battles, but I'm afraid those things take time.
Basing characters on yourself is a great way to go, especially if you have Dissociative Identity Disorder. Also, there's more of those shameless personal-interest-inserts coming because the second novel is about Shin-tsu joining a band at school.
PS: Go for it! --Ryuno
- i actually haven't slept since my last reply, lol. i've been writing untill morning and then went to work. but i have only written 2 pages (1000 words) about someone eating breakfast.it was fun, but i hoped to write more in 4 hours, lol.
i'll wait for future volumes then. i hope you will explain in detail what is happening to Shin-tsu and why he's having these delusions of superpower. and i've also included my hobby in my novel, which really wouldn't seem to fit into the story for a person not familiar with the hobby.
about the dissociative identity disorder.
1)if you meant that you can use the 2nd identity as a base for the character, there would be the problem of the identities having seperate banks of memory(you don't remember what you did when the 2nd identity takes control of your body), meaning - you can't know your other identity nearly as well as yours and thus it becomes a poor model. you don't know it's reasoning, logic, desires and so on. so in the end it becomes basing a character on another person and not on yourself, which are two diferent things.
2) if you meant that if you had the disorder, you'd use yourself as a base for a character that has the same disorder, then i agree with you.
3) your sentence about identity disorder can also imply that you (kyuno) have that disorder. you may not have meant this at all and do not have this disorder, but the english language, just as any other, allows room for misunderstandings, espeacially for us, who speak english as a second language. so please don't be offended. my apologies in advance. --Idiffer 14:07, 15 October 2010 (UTC)
