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Making some grammatical and general editing changes. As it stands right now, the flow of text for this chapter is pretty poor so I'm trying to clean it up.
  
Making some grammatical and general editing changes. As it stands right now, the flow of text for this chapter is pretty poor so I'm trying to clean it up.
 
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== Vocabulary Consistency ==
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As I read through the novel for the first time, I noticed that there is a great deal of inconsistent vocabulary being used from chapter to chapter. One example is the name of the Flicaubh's squadron. In Ch. 2, it is called the 'Scourge Squadron,' but later in the novel I believe it is called the 'Destruction Squadron.' I think it is called 'Scourge Squadron' in the anime. So, I thought I would start a topic geared toward vocabulary consistency. I'm sure there are several other words that are not consistently used throughout...as far as the squadron name, I prefer Scourge Squadron over Destruction Squadron...it just sounds more intimidating. ;)
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I'm open to other's thoughts, though.
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Are there other words that need to be settled on throughout the chapters?

Revision as of 22:42, 13 July 2011

Making some grammatical and general editing changes. As it stands right now, the flow of text for this chapter is pretty poor so I'm trying to clean it up. 192.55.54.38

Vocabulary Consistency

As I read through the novel for the first time, I noticed that there is a great deal of inconsistent vocabulary being used from chapter to chapter. One example is the name of the Flicaubh's squadron. In Ch. 2, it is called the 'Scourge Squadron,' but later in the novel I believe it is called the 'Destruction Squadron.' I think it is called 'Scourge Squadron' in the anime. So, I thought I would start a topic geared toward vocabulary consistency. I'm sure there are several other words that are not consistently used throughout...as far as the squadron name, I prefer Scourge Squadron over Destruction Squadron...it just sounds more intimidating. ;) I'm open to other's thoughts, though.

Are there other words that need to be settled on throughout the chapters?

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