Difference between revisions of "Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 7 Chapter 12"
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I'll change it to make it a bit clearer, she is speaking to an unnamed person, whom is presumed to be the butler from her house [[Special:Contributions/77.102.254.91|77.102.254.91]] 14:43, 3 March 2013 (CST) |
I'll change it to make it a bit clearer, she is speaking to an unnamed person, whom is presumed to be the butler from her house [[Special:Contributions/77.102.254.91|77.102.254.91]] 14:43, 3 March 2013 (CST) |
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+ | Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them. |
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+ | I believe the passage above should be written as below. Pleas let me know what you think. |
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+ | Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust. |
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+ | Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them. |
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Revision as of 03:22, 5 March 2013
Hmmm, I thought you gave yourself a bit of rest, but now looking at the number of characters it looks like you worked maybe even harder than usually. Thanks for all your hard work. --Zuruumi (talk) 19:31, 2 March 2013 (CST)
Questions Related to this Chapter
"After speaking with what must have been the butler from her home "
At that line, somehow I felt strange. Could anyone give an explanation?
--Mada (talk) 03:09, 3 March 2013 (CST)
I'll change it to make it a bit clearer, she is speaking to an unnamed person, whom is presumed to be the butler from her house 77.102.254.91 14:43, 3 March 2013 (CST)
Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust.
— Divine Left —
Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them.
— Demon Right —
I believe the passage above should be written as below. Pleas let me know what you think.
Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust.
— Demon Right —
Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them.
— Divine Left —