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I'll change it to make it a bit clearer, she is speaking to an unnamed person, whom is presumed to be the butler from her house [[Special:Contributions/77.102.254.91|77.102.254.91]] 14:43, 3 March 2013 (CST)
 
I'll change it to make it a bit clearer, she is speaking to an unnamed person, whom is presumed to be the butler from her house [[Special:Contributions/77.102.254.91|77.102.254.91]] 14:43, 3 March 2013 (CST)
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Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust.
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— Divine Left —
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Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them.
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— Demon Right —
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I believe the passage above should be written as below. Pleas let me know what you think.
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Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust.
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— Demon Right —
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Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them.
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— Divine Left —

Revision as of 03:22, 5 March 2013

Hmmm, I thought you gave yourself a bit of rest, but now looking at the number of characters it looks like you worked maybe even harder than usually. Thanks for all your hard work. --Zuruumi (talk) 19:31, 2 March 2013 (CST)

Questions Related to this Chapter

"After speaking with what must have been the butler from her home "
At that line, somehow I felt strange. Could anyone give an explanation? --Mada (talk) 03:09, 3 March 2013 (CST)

I'll change it to make it a bit clearer, she is speaking to an unnamed person, whom is presumed to be the butler from her house 77.102.254.91 14:43, 3 March 2013 (CST)

Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust.


— Divine Left —

Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them.

— Demon Right —


I believe the passage above should be written as below. Pleas let me know what you think.


Anything that the right hand pointed at faded away into dust.

— Demon Right —

Soldiers on the brink of death would revive when the left hand fell upon them.

— Divine Left —