Talk:Ore no Imōto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai:Volume 5 Chapter 3

From Baka-Tsuki
Jump to navigation Jump to search

Hey I would like to help edit this chapter. I just made an account so I don't know exactly what process I need to go through; sorry if I'm posting in the wrong section, but I tried editing it and I was allowed to delete anything I wanted but could only type one letter only after deleting atleast 1 letter so I refrained from doing so. If anyone could respond and help clear up this matter for me I'd be grateful. "GHBaseStone (talk) 11:44, 1 February 2013 (CST)"

The 3rd sentence is written as 'Heard that, both Kuroneko and Sena glared at each other'. The part in the begining 'Heard that,' doesnt make sense. It should either be 'Hearing that, both kuroneko and Sena glared at each other.' or 'Having heard that, both Kuroneko and Sena glared at each other.' or 'After hearing that, both Kuroneko and Sena glared at each other.' or it could simply be 'Both Kuroneko and Sena glared at each other.' I think it should be either 'Hearing that, both Kuroneko and Sena glared at each other.' or 'Both Kuroneko and Sena glared at each other.'. "GHBaseStone (talk) 11:59, 5 February 2013 (CST)"

Line 10 is written as 'Both of them voiced their complains. Why were they only unite at time like this?' I think it should be writen as 'Both of them voiced their complaints. Why do they only unite at times like this?' "GHBaseStone (talk) 12:07, 5 February 2013 (CST)"

I inserted your edits; the page doesn't seem to be protected in anyway, just have a go at editting the page again, maybe it's just your computer or web browser being buggy at the time. --Drowzycow (talk) 18:29, 5 February 2013 (CST)

Well i can type whatever here, but not on oreimo? i was also able to type in a to aru majutsu no index editing window. i dont know whats the problem but im ok with typing my suggestions here. "GHBaseStone (talk) 21:29, 5 February 2013 (CST)"

The second half of line 10 written as 'Why were they only unite at time like this?' could also be written as 'Why were they only united at times like this?' "GHBaseStone (talk) 21:47, 5 February 2013 (CST)"

In line 5 'sign' should be 'signs'. The sentence would be written as 'Both of them showed obvious signs of discomfort.' "GHBaseStone (talk) 21:54, 5 February 2013 (CST)"

So i took a shot at de-engrishing this dung pile. Now if anyone would do the punctuation... Atikabubu (talk) 06:56, 18 March 2013 (CDT)

Much appreciated by all anons to read this LN Atikabubu. Anon.

Retrieved from "https://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Talk:Ore_no_Imōto_ga_Konna_ni_Kawaii_Wake_ga_Nai:Volume_5_Chapter_3&oldid=235910"