Editing Tate no Yuusha no Nariagari:Web Chapter 329

Jump to navigation Jump to search

Warning: You are not logged in. Your IP address will be publicly visible if you make any edits. If you log in or create an account, your edits will be attributed to your username, along with other benefits.

The edit can be undone. Please check the comparison below to verify that this is what you want to do, and then save the changes below to finish undoing the edit.

Latest revision Your text
Line 202: Line 202:
   
   
The women become speechless and drop their rifles.
+
The women became speechless and dropped their rifles.
   
   
 
“Wh-why….” (Woman)
 
“Wh-why….” (Woman)
   
“Oh dear… what are you doing? You guys are merciless.” (Naofumi)
+
“Oh dear… what are you doing. You guys are merciless.” (Naofumi)
   
   
Line 234: Line 234:
 
I’m in a good mood.
 
I’m in a good mood.
   
….For me to be in a good mood due to this sort of thing, I’ve also changed.
+
….For me to be in a good mood with this kind of thing, I’ve also changed.
   
If the old me was flooded by women screaming jeers in my original world, it probably wouldn’t be strange for him to want to cry.
+
If the old me was flooded by women screaming jeers in my original world, it probably wouldn’t be strange for me to want to cry.
   
 
It can also be taken as me getting stronger, but it’s questionable whether this is a good or bad thing.
 
It can also be taken as me getting stronger, but it’s questionable whether this is a good or bad thing.
Line 262: Line 262:
 
In the middle of my talking, lightning rains down from the sky.
 
In the middle of my talking, lightning rains down from the sky.
   
If I’m not mistaken, it is the ritual magic, Judgement.
+
If I’m not mistaken, it was the ritual magic, Judgement.
   
With their levels all above 250 and enough people to cast Choral Magic, they fire.
+
With their levels all above 250 and enough people to cast Choral Magic, they fired.
   
They converge the power of Judgement so that it won’t hit Tact.
+
They converged the power of Judgement so that it wouldn’t hit Tact.
   
   
Line 278: Line 278:
   
   
Oh? There were several people who realized.
+
Oh? There were several people who realised.
   
 
But it’s too late.
 
But it’s too late.
Line 292: Line 292:
 
Ah…. as I expected, the strength is high.
 
Ah…. as I expected, the strength is high.
   
One of the mirrors breaks.
+
One of the mirrors broke.
   
However the second one is fine, and successfully reflects in accordance with my predictions.
+
However the second one was fine, and successfully reflected in accordance with my predictions.
   
   

Please note that all contributions to Baka-Tsuki are considered to be released under the TLG Translation Common Agreement v.0.4.1 (see Baka-Tsuki:Copyrights for details). If you do not want your writing to be edited mercilessly and redistributed at will, then do not submit it here.
You are also promising us that you wrote this yourself, or copied it from a public domain or similar free resource. Do not submit copyrighted work without permission!

To protect the wiki against automated edit spam, we kindly ask you to solve the following CAPTCHA:

Cancel Editing help (opens in new window)