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Of course, the shield itself has a high defense, so there would be no problem if it was me.
 
Of course, the shield itself has a high defense, so there would be no problem if it was me.
   
The beam shoots for 5 seconds and stops.
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The beam shot for 5 seconds and stopped.
   
There, emitting smoke throughout his body, is a worn-out Tact who is out of breath and barely managing to stand.
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There, emitting smoke throughout his body, was a worn-out Tact who was out of breath and barely managing to stand.
   
It seems Tact incurred a befitting amount of damage from taking Fenrir Force’s beam.
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It seems Tact incurred a befitting amount of damage for taking Fenrir Force’s beam.
   
   

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