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The nagging chats of the technicians could be heard.
 
The nagging chats of the technicians could be heard.
   
Right at that moment, opposite the direction Menvil’s squad was traveling in, a bunch of trolls appeared. Trolls were humanoids that resided in the northern highlands of Albion, and they could be as tall as five men.
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Right at that moment, opposite the direction Menvil’s squad was traveling in, a bunch of trolls appeared. Trolls are humanoids that reside at the northern highlands of Albion, and they can be as tall as five men.
   
 
Even though their numbers weren’t great, they possessed a strong desire for battle. War between humans was not their concern. However, they would be able to use clubs to beat their most hated humans into human paste as much as they want, so they participated in this war as well.
 
Even though their numbers weren’t great, they possessed a strong desire for battle. War between humans was not their concern. However, they would be able to use clubs to beat their most hated humans into human paste as much as they want, so they participated in this war as well.
   
Indeed, they made for reliable comrades. Because of their huge size, they were very useful in a siege. Yet they were always acting arrogant and almighty no matter where they went, so human soldiers hated them very much. And they would always defy orders and act on their own, so no matter how strong of a force they were, there were a lot of commanding officers who were unable to handle them.
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Indeed, they made for reliable comrades. Because of their huge size, they were very useful in a siege. Yet they always act arrogant and almighty no matter where they go, so human soldiers hate them very much. And they always defy orders and act on their own, so no matter how strong of a force they were, there were a lot of commanding officers who were unable to handle them.
   
 
Speaking of which, for trolls like these to gather and move forward in a group of around twenty, it looked like a large forest sprinting ahead. The technicians and marines hurriedly ran to the sides, letting this group of trolls pass.
 
Speaking of which, for trolls like these to gather and move forward in a group of around twenty, it looked like a large forest sprinting ahead. The technicians and marines hurriedly ran to the sides, letting this group of trolls pass.
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“Tell them, this land belongs to humans.”
 
“Tell them, this land belongs to humans.”
   
His subordinate said a few lines in Troll language. Once the sentence had left his mouth, the Trolls agitatedly raised their spiked hammers in their hands.
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His subordinate said a few lines in Troll language. Once the sentence left his mouth, the Trolls agitatedly raised their spiked hammers in their hands.
   
 
There was a piece of metal even larger than a cannonball at the tip of the spiked hammer, something so strong it could even smash a solid castle wall in one blow.
 
There was a piece of metal even larger than a cannonball at the tip of the spiked hammer, something so strong it could even smash a solid castle wall in one blow.
   
If hit directly by that thing, a human would stand no chance of survival.
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To be hit directly by that thing, a human stood no chance of survival.
   
 
“Hey, what did you say to them?” Menvil asked.
 
“Hey, what did you say to them?” Menvil asked.
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One of the furious Trolls aimed at the group and sent his spiked hammer crashing down.
 
One of the furious Trolls aimed at the group and sent his spiked hammer crashing down.
   
Menvil used his left hand to lift his coat and took out the weapon inside; it was a long, coarse metal rod. He used his right hand to hold the metal rod, waving it lightly.
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Menvil used his left hand to lift his coat taking out the weapon inside; it was a long, coarse metal rod. He used his right hand to hold the metal rod, waving it lightly.
   
 
And then he chanted a spell.
 
And then he chanted a spell.
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In the blink of an eye, that flame melted the Troll’s arm together with the spiked hammer. The metal pieces that were heated red flew off in all directions, but the man beside Menvil carried out a spell-chant, and used Wind magic.
 
In the blink of an eye, that flame melted the Troll’s arm together with the spiked hammer. The metal pieces that were heated red flew off in all directions, but the man beside Menvil carried out a spell-chant, and used Wind magic.
   
A small tornado engulfed the melted metal, and wrapped it onto the faces of the Trolls. The red metal scorched their skins and they gave off painful moans.
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A small tornado engulfed the melted metal, and wrapped it onto the faces of the Trolls. The red metal scorched their skins and they gave off painful mourns.
   
 
The fire emerging from the tip of the wand became even stronger.
 
The fire emerging from the tip of the wand became even stronger.

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