Editing Zero no Tsukaima:Volume3 Chapter9

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“What? A fire? Was it an accident?” whispered Fevisu (フェヴィス)
 
“What? A fire? Was it an accident?” whispered Fevisu (フェヴィス)
   
The next instant, another startling thing occurred. The ship that was engulfed by flames exploded in the air.
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The next instant, another startling thing occurred. The ship that was engulfed by flames and exploded in the air.
   
 
The Albion ship was reduced to ruins and came crashing down to the ground.
 
The Albion ship was reduced to ruins and came crashing down to the ground.
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La Ramée’s cry was drowned by the bombardment from the Lexington.
 
La Ramée’s cry was drowned by the bombardment from the Lexington.
   
Impact. The mast of the Mercator broke off and a few holes were made in the deck.
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Impact. The mast of the Mercator broke off and a few holes had been made in the deck.
   
 
“How can their cannons reach from such a distance?!” said a surprised Fevisu (フェヴィス) on the shaking deck.
 
“How can their cannons reach from such a distance?!” said a surprised Fevisu (フェヴィス) on the shaking deck.
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The generals, cabinet ministers and other officials immediately held a meeting. But the meeting was little more than a disordered ramble. Opinions that they should inquire Albion about the circumstances of the events, or that they should dispatch messengers requesting aid were thrown about.
 
The generals, cabinet ministers and other officials immediately held a meeting. But the meeting was little more than a disordered ramble. Opinions that they should inquire Albion about the circumstances of the events, or that they should dispatch messengers requesting aid were thrown about.
   
Sitting in the meeting’s seat of honor was a shocked Henrietta. She was wearing her beautiful wedding dress that had just been finished. She had originally planned to head to Germania by carriage after the dress was finished.
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Sitting in the meeting’s seat of honor was a shocked Henrietta. She was wearing her beautiful wedding dress that had just been finished. She had originally planned to head to Germania by carriage after the dress had been finished.
   
She was like a blooming flower in the meeting room. But no one even noticed.
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She was like a blooming flower in the meeting room. But no one had even noticed.
   
 
“Albion states that our fleet attacked them first! However our fleet says they only did a cannon salute.”
 
“Albion states that our fleet attacked them first! However our fleet says they only did a cannon salute.”
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“Let’s get in the house,” urged Siesta, hiding her fear.
 
“Let’s get in the house,” urged Siesta, hiding her fear.
   
Inside the house, her parents were looking out of the windows with troubled expressions.
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Inside the house, her parents were looking out the windows with troubled expressions.
   
 
“Isn’t that Albion's fleet?” her father said, looking at the ship anchored in the field.
 
“Isn’t that Albion's fleet?” her father said, looking at the ship anchored in the field.

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