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Saito and Louise, after dismissing the grandmother Helen with a "take care", decided to take a walk in the woods as usual.
 
Saito and Louise, after dismissing the grandmother Helen with a "take care", decided to take a walk in the woods as usual.
   
Strong rays of sunlight projected through the trees, giving this place a energizing feel. This plot of forest was rid of all sounds other than the chirping of birds; Saito and Louise were walking along this small path.
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Strong rays of sunlight projected through the trees, giving this place a energizing feel. This plot of forest was rid of all sounds other than the chirping of birds; Saito and Louise was walking along this small path.
   
 
Behind the two of them, Siesta was carrying a basket and smiling as she followed them. It wasn't long before they found a place with a good view and atmosphere, the perfect location for lunch.
 
Behind the two of them, Siesta was carrying a basket and smiling as she followed them. It wasn't long before they found a place with a good view and atmosphere, the perfect location for lunch.
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"What’s the matter? Do I have something on my face?"
 
"What’s the matter? Do I have something on my face?"
   
"N-no... It's not that..."
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"N-no ... It's not that..."
   
 
"Then... why are you staring at me like that?" said Louise with condemning half closed eyelids and in a cool expression. Saito became even more flustered as if a lost sheep without a sense of direction. Saito's voice began to tremble slightly.
 
"Then... why are you staring at me like that?" said Louise with condemning half closed eyelids and in a cool expression. Saito became even more flustered as if a lost sheep without a sense of direction. Saito's voice began to tremble slightly.
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"Well isn't that obvious? Do you know, there can't be a girl cuter than me in existence?"
 
"Well isn't that obvious? Do you know, there can't be a girl cuter than me in existence?"
   
"I, I was thinking so too, too..."
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"I, I was thinking so too, too....."
   
Basically, the proud Louise was was like a fire fueled with firewood. As far as Saito knew, there was not another person in the whole wide world and Halkeginia who could fit the attitude Louise had better...
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Basically, the proud Louise was was like a fire fueled with firewood. As far as Saito knew, there was not another person in the whole wide world and Halkeginia who could fit the attitude Louise had better....
   
 
"You sure are lucky. To have someone like me beside you."
 
"You sure are lucky. To have someone like me beside you."
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"That's it?"
 
"That's it?"
   
"...Mhm."
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"....Mhm."
   
 
Saito wasn't too sure about her definition of romantic, therefore put up a serious expression and lifted Louise's chin.
 
Saito wasn't too sure about her definition of romantic, therefore put up a serious expression and lifted Louise's chin.
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''This girl's difficulty level is too low,'' Saito sighed. At the same time, looking at the unbelievably easy but incredibly cute Louise, Saito instinctively hugged her tightly and kissed her. Louise, in response, also hugged Saito's head and closed her eyes dreamily.
 
''This girl's difficulty level is too low,'' Saito sighed. At the same time, looking at the unbelievably easy but incredibly cute Louise, Saito instinctively hugged her tightly and kissed her. Louise, in response, also hugged Saito's head and closed her eyes dreamily.
   
At this moment...
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At this moment....
   
 
Crack, it sounded as if something broke.
 
Crack, it sounded as if something broke.
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With their skirts fluttering in the wind, Saito was indulging in how beautifully this scene is set up. Upon realizing Saito's stares, the two immediately stood up yelling something like "Where are you looking at," "Whose fault do you think it is," and "Which one of us are you going to choose," all while hitting and kicking Saito.
 
With their skirts fluttering in the wind, Saito was indulging in how beautifully this scene is set up. Upon realizing Saito's stares, the two immediately stood up yelling something like "Where are you looking at," "Whose fault do you think it is," and "Which one of us are you going to choose," all while hitting and kicking Saito.
   
Then Louise started glaring at Siesta with a proud face as if she had won, saying, "The conclusion is obvious isn't it." Neither did Siesta back down and retaliated with a "Huh, it's still too early for an outcome."
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Then Louise started glaring at Siesta with a proud face as if she had won, saying, "The conclusion is obvious isn't it." Neither did Siesta back down and retaliated with a "Huh, it's still too early for an outcome"
   
 
Of course, while they were glaring at each other, neither of them stopped their almost repetitive hitting and kicking of Saito. Saito in some degree gave up as well, thinking, ''well, I'm fine as long as they don't go any further than this,'' and quietly received all the blows. ''Whether if it's Siesta or Louise, they're both gorgeous beautiful girls. I guess this is a suitable payment in return for living with both of them together.''
 
Of course, while they were glaring at each other, neither of them stopped their almost repetitive hitting and kicking of Saito. Saito in some degree gave up as well, thinking, ''well, I'm fine as long as they don't go any further than this,'' and quietly received all the blows. ''Whether if it's Siesta or Louise, they're both gorgeous beautiful girls. I guess this is a suitable payment in return for living with both of them together.''
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And of course, Louise would blow up when she wakes up in the morning, and yell something like, "Didn't I properly give you a bed all for yourself?!" And Siesta would reply something like, "Oh, the bed's too uncomfortable," or, "this house looks haunted it's so scary at night!" and so on.
 
And of course, Louise would blow up when she wakes up in the morning, and yell something like, "Didn't I properly give you a bed all for yourself?!" And Siesta would reply something like, "Oh, the bed's too uncomfortable," or, "this house looks haunted it's so scary at night!" and so on.
   
"What do you mean this house looks haunted?" Louise questioned one day with big stern interrogating eyes.
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"What do you mean this house looks haunted," Louise questioned one day with big stern interrogating eyes.
   
Siesta looked away, "Sigh-, how should I put it, it's kinda white, and light, floating in midair, you know. It's really terrifying..."
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Siesta looked away, "Sigh-, how should I put it, it's kinda white, and light, floating in midair, you know. It's really terrifying...."
   
 
"Stop lying!"
 
"Stop lying!"
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Louise replied with gritted teeth glaring at Siesta.
 
Louise replied with gritted teeth glaring at Siesta.
   
And on that night, Louise actually decided to go to Siesta's room, planning to finish off Siesta once in for all if the specter didn't appear. She thought of bringing Saito with her, but she definitely didn't expect.
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And on that night, Louise actually decided to go to Siesta's room, planning to finish off Siesta once in for all if the specter didn't appear. She thought of bringing Saito with her, but she definitely didn't expect
"If there're more than one person in the room, the ghost won't come out."
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"If there're more than one person in the room, the ghost won't come out"
 
said Siesta.
 
said Siesta.
   
Without a choice, Louise could only sleep alone that night. ''It's only a stupid lie after all. Huh. About time I should give Saito a lesson too, I'll go over and yell at him," just as she thought so and prepared to leave...''
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Without a choice, Louise could only sleep alone that night. ''It's only a stupid lie after all. Huh. About time I should give Saito a lesson too, I'll go over and yell at him," just as she thought so and prepared to leave....
   
 
A white object floated into the room, causing Louise to immediately jump since she didn't expect it would actually appear at all, and cried out of fear,
 
A white object floated into the room, causing Louise to immediately jump since she didn't expect it would actually appear at all, and cried out of fear,
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"You, you..."
 
"You, you..."
   
"Sheesh, you sc-scared me too."
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"Sheesh, you sc-scared me too"
   
 
Entering into a storm of fury, Louise ran after Siesta and used her magic without thinking, which ended up hitting Siesta's bed directly.
 
Entering into a storm of fury, Louise ran after Siesta and used her magic without thinking, which ended up hitting Siesta's bed directly.
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Although Louise later begged Saito, "Please, please buy a new one."
 
Although Louise later begged Saito, "Please, please buy a new one."
   
"You'll only break it again, so no."
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"You'll only break it again so no."
 
Saito refused without even looking at her.
 
Saito refused without even looking at her.
   
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"Master, this is bad, there's going to be trouble."
 
"Master, this is bad, there's going to be trouble."
 
Grandma Helen's kind round face was full of anxiety and worries, and said so while running towards the group.
 
Grandma Helen's kind round face was full of anxiety and worries, and said so while running towards the group.
"There's a visitor, but, but, but it's a frightening young lady... She looks like she's the wife of someone famous, but she's really frightening! She glared at me in front of my face with this, this frown on her head! Glared without blinking!"
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"There's a visitor, but, but, but it's a frightening young lady.... She looks like she's the wife of someone famous, but she's really frightening! She glared at me in front of my face with this, this frown on her head! Glared without blinking!"
   
 
"A frightening young lady?" Louise asked.
 
"A frightening young lady?" Louise asked.
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"You ''don't'' understand. Your power is not achieved by you alone. This power is great enough to decide the fate of our mother country. Be more self-respectful, Louise."
 
"You ''don't'' understand. Your power is not achieved by you alone. This power is great enough to decide the fate of our mother country. Be more self-respectful, Louise."
   
"But... it doesn't matter. This won't cause anything disastrous."
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"But.... it doesn't matter. This won't cause anything disastrous."
   
 
"What makes you say so?"
 
"What makes you say so?"
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So, Louise told Eléonore everything that happened between Romalia and Gallia a while ago.
 
So, Louise told Eléonore everything that happened between Romalia and Gallia a while ago.
"... And because of that, the revival of the void is now impossible... Romalia is incapable of conducting a crusade anymore. Although it won't change the fact that my power is great..., in other words, I don't think it's necessary to be as self-respectful as you say."
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"...And because of that, the revival of the void is now impossible... Romalia is incapable of conducting a crusade anymore. Although it won't change the fact that my power is great...., in other words, I don't think it's necessary to be as self-respectful as you say."
 
Then Louise continued, "Even if it were as you said, if I needed to protect my powers, Saito is indispensable. There can't be another person better than Saito to protect me."
 
Then Louise continued, "Even if it were as you said, if I needed to protect my powers, Saito is indispensable. There can't be another person better than Saito to protect me."
   
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Eléonore snorted and rushed out of the door without greeting any one of them goodbye.
 
Eléonore snorted and rushed out of the door without greeting any one of them goodbye.
   
"Left a bad impression..." Saito muttered to himself sheepishly before turning around to Louise.
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"Left a bad impression...." Saito muttered to himself sheepishly before turning around to Louise.
"Say Louise, just now, about teaching me to become a proper noble..."
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"Say Louise, just now, about teaching me to become a proper noble...."
 
Saito began only to find Louise holding a whip while growling with a low voice, flicking the whip god-knows-when-she-had-taken-out on the bed.
 
Saito began only to find Louise holding a whip while growling with a low voice, flicking the whip god-knows-when-she-had-taken-out on the bed.
   
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"Shut up! By the time Eléonore returns, I will have turned you from the inside out to an impeccable noble!"
 
"Shut up! By the time Eléonore returns, I will have turned you from the inside out to an impeccable noble!"
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