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===Chapter 3: An Elven Gandálfr===
 
===Chapter 3: An Elven Gandálfr===
 
 
“What?”
 
“What?”
   
''I—I slept in this kind of place?''
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I—I slept in this kind of place?
   
''No, that can't be possible. I was inside Romania's church with Louise. Something was odd with her alluring presence......then, in the room, she drank wine. The wine was mixed with some kind of medicine....''
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No, that can't be possible. I'm inside Romania's church with Louise. Something is odd with her alluring presence......then, in the room, she drank wine. The wine is mixed with some kind of medicine....
   
''Does this mean that Louise carried me here?''
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Does this mean that Louise carried me here?
   
''Where is this place anyways?''
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Where is this place anyways?
   
 
Saito shook his head as he sleepily eyed his surroundings in confusion. He was sleeping on a hill that seemed bit taller than usual, leaning against an old man's tree's roots. Intense sunlight lit the same hill, making it a desert-like oasis. With a piece of shade around, only bits of sunlight leaked towards him, inevitably forcing Saito to squint.
 
Saito shook his head as he sleepily eyed his surroundings in confusion. He was sleeping on a hill that seemed bit taller than usual, leaning against an old man's tree's roots. Intense sunlight lit the same hill, making it a desert-like oasis. With a piece of shade around, only bits of sunlight leaked towards him, inevitably forcing Saito to squint.
   
The grass field was distant; mountains and forests could be seen.
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The grass field is distant; mountains and forests can be seen.
   
 
Still, Saito lifted his legs and sat down, stretching his neck.
 
Still, Saito lifted his legs and sat down, stretching his neck.
   
''Was this one of Romania's grass fields?''
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Is this one of Romania's grass fields?
   
 
Truly nerve-wracking. Saito shook his head at his situation. His body seemed fine, in its usual sweater and jeans, prior to the wearing a cloak.
 
Truly nerve-wracking. Saito shook his head at his situation. His body seemed fine, in its usual sweater and jeans, prior to the wearing a cloak.
   
He had been dressed like this during his times with Louise. Simply, finding himself moved here after regaining consciousness in a church shouldn't be an issue.
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He had been dressed like this during his times with Louise. Simply, finding himself moved here after regaining conscious in a church shouldn't be an issue.
   
''Still, why would I be sleeping on a grass field……''
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Still, why would I be sleeping on a grass field……
   
“Each time I lose consciousness, I wind up in some incredibly ridiculous place,” he mused.
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“Each time I lose conscious, I wind up in some incredibly ridiculous place,” he mused.
   
 
A figure emerged from the distance.
 
A figure emerged from the distance.
   
''Who is it?''
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Who is it?
   
 
Out of habit, Saito reached towards his back, but Derflinger wasn't there. He had left it in the room. Aside from feeling a bit uncomfortable, there shouldn't be much of a problem; the approaching person's footsteps were leisure and slow,indicating no hostility.
 
Out of habit, Saito reached towards his back, but Derflinger wasn't there. He had left it in the room. Aside from feeling a bit uncomfortable, there shouldn't be much of a problem; the approaching person's footsteps were leisure and slow,indicating no hostility.
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She was around twenty years old.
 
She was around twenty years old.
   
She had a mature charm and cheerful presence to her. With a friendly smile, she threw a leather belt at Saito.
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She had a mature charm and cheerful presence to her. With a friendly smile, <!-- Note: Something is odd and inconsistent with the context with "leather belt." Greatly appreciated if someone could check that. --> she threw a leather belt at Saito.
   
 
“I brought you water.”
 
“I brought you water.”
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“My name is Sasha. You?I thought you were a traveler based on how you were sleeping here, but I don't see any luggage...”
 
“My name is Sasha. You?I thought you were a traveler based on how you were sleeping here, but I don't see any luggage...”
   
“My name is Saito. Hiraga Saito. I'm not here on a trip. I just found myself here after regaining consciousness....”
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“My name is Saito. Hiraga Saito. I'm not here on a trip. I just found myself here after regaining conscious....”
   
 
“Right,” said Sasha before studying Saito. She easily removed her hat, revealing something that would have frightened just about anyone. Her ears were those of an elf's.
 
“Right,” said Sasha before studying Saito. She easily removed her hat, revealing something that would have frightened just about anyone. Her ears were those of an elf's.
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The woman now eyed Saito with interest.
 
The woman now eyed Saito with interest.
   
''Rare?Something was wrong with that phrase; everyone knows about elves in Halkeginia.''
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Rare?Something was wrong with that phrase; everyone knows about elves in Halkeginia.
   
 
“Thank you for the water. I'm very grateful. By the way, what do you mean by people who know about elves being 'rare?'”
 
“Thank you for the water. I'm very grateful. By the way, what do you mean by people who know about elves being 'rare?'”
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“What? Even if it's not precisely what you meant,I come from a place called Saharan, but according to him, that place is called ‘Igujestansea.”
 
“What? Even if it's not precisely what you meant,I come from a place called Saharan, but according to him, that place is called ‘Igujestansea.”
   
''Igujestansea....never heard of that name.''
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Igujestansea....never heard of that name.
   
''Besides, why did I find myself awakening in such a place?
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Besides, why did I find myself awakening in such a place?
   
''Who is responsible for this?
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Who is responsible for this?
   
''Could it be that Pope?But what good would it do to leave me here?Or maybe, this is one of King Joseph's ulterior motives?
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Could it be that Pope?But what good would it do to leave me here?Or maybe, this is one of King Joseph's ulterior motives?
   
''However, the heart of Romania, the Church,is not such an easy place to access, even for King Joseph...Wait...if say he used that “Void” Magic, it might be possible.''
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However, the heart of Romania, the Church,is not such an easy place to access, even for King Joseph...Wait...if say he used that “Void” Magic, it might be possible.
   
 
King Joseph?
 
King Joseph?
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Just as he was thinking, the sky suddenly made “pipapipa” noises as it rained. Saito and Sasha quickly hid under the trees.
 
Just as he was thinking, the sky suddenly made “pipapipa” noises as it rained. Saito and Sasha quickly hid under the trees.
   
“That essentially gave off an extremely strange feeling.”
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“That essentially gave off an extremely pleasant feeling. <!-- Not sure about this translation. Greatly appreciated if someone could check it. -->
   
 
Sasha muttered as she looked at the rain.
 
Sasha muttered as she looked at the rain.
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“Yes. As a matter of fact, I am someone who is too shy to face people, but I don't feel that way around you.”
 
“Yes. As a matter of fact, I am someone who is too shy to face people, but I don't feel that way around you.”
   
Is that so,Saito couldn't help but sigh. Speaking of that, he himself didn't feel distant, in the slightest, around Sasha. Even if he was close to Tiffania and has faced life and death situations, before an elf, who was believed to be one of the strongest and most feared creatures in Halkeginia, on impulse, he too felt....
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Is that so,Saito couldn't help but sigh. Speaking of that, he himself didn't feel distant, in the slightest, around Sasha. Even if he was close to Tiffania and has faced life and death situations, before an elf, who was believed to be one of the strongest and most feared creatures in Hakaginia, on impulse, he too felt....
   
 
“I also feel the same way.”
 
“I also feel the same way.”
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“Yes....”
 
“Yes....”
   
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However, despite the lack of simplicity in the task, when it was time to take another step and compare the minor differences between their experiences..... <!-- Not sure about this translation. Greatly appreciated if someone could check it. -->
However, he felt that it was not all of what he felt, and just as he was thinking about what all of that was about...
 
   
 
Sasha suddenly narrowed her eyes and rose with a grim expression.
 
Sasha suddenly narrowed her eyes and rose with a grim expression.
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“Oh? That's a wolf?”
 
“Oh? That's a wolf?”
   
Saito, having seen a wolf for the first time, carefully stared at the wolf that was about twenty meters away. It really wasn't anything like a dog. It looked savage, wary of its every surrounding.
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Saito, having seen a wolf for the first time, carefully stared at the wolf that was about twenty meters away. It was really wasn't anything like a dog. It looked savage, wary of its every surrounding.
   
 
“Looks like it's intending to make us its dinner.”
 
“Looks like it's intending to make us its dinner.”
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“Oh, what a coincidence, but I've got more confidence than you. It's really a matter of whether you are lucky or not. ”
 
“Oh, what a coincidence, but I've got more confidence than you. It's really a matter of whether you are lucky or not. ”
   
“Yeah, but I suggest that you just lend me one if you have one. Anything would do. Even if that broken piece of wood over at the side there, might be able to work, if you push it.......”
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“Yeah, but I suggest that you just lend me one if you have one. Anything would do. Even if that broken piece of wood over at the side there might be able to work if you push it.......”
   
 
Even without the Gandálfr's power, he could make himself a sword. Defeating a pack of wolves was something that he would have liked the Gandálfr's power for, though.
 
Even without the Gandálfr's power, he could make himself a sword. Defeating a pack of wolves was something that he would have liked the Gandálfr's power for, though.
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In the next moment, Saito was at a loss for words from shock. He couldn't believe what he was seeing at the time.
 
In the next moment, Saito was at a loss for words from shock. He couldn't believe what he was seeing at the time.
   
As soon as she wielded the dagger, Sasha's left hand began to glow. Or more accurately, the back of her left hand began to glow.
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As soon as she wielded the dagger, Sasha's left hand began to glow. Or more accurately, her left hand began to glow.
   
 
On that was something that he was very familiar with....runes that formed words that were already a part of his body by some significant event.
 
On that was something that he was very familiar with....runes that formed words that were already a part of his body by some significant event.
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“Anyhow, why don't you join me.”
 
“Anyhow, why don't you join me.”
   
Having said that, Sasha pulled out a dagger for Saito. Saito gripped it tightly.
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Having said that, Sasha pulled out a dagger for Saito. Saito gripped it tightly. This elf was a Gandálfr? Why? There are other Gandálfrs besides me? How is that possible?
   
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As thought it had seen Saito's momentary confusion, a wolf fiercely lunged at him.
''This elf was a Gandálfr? Why? There are other Gandálfrs besides me? How is that possible?''
 
 
As though it had seen Saito's momentary confusion, a wolf fiercely lunged at him.
 
   
 
Damn.
 
Damn.
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For a moment, it was as though her entire body had disappeared. An agile figure shuttled, just like the dancers from Albion, with her robe flying in the sky.
 
For a moment, it was as though her entire body had disappeared. An agile figure shuttled, just like the dancers from Albion, with her robe flying in the sky.
   
The wolves that had lunged at her either got their legs chopped off, or were beheaded by her, and they fell towards the ground. Sasha stabbed her dagger into wolf that had its legs chopped off and ended its life.
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The wolf that had lunged at her either had its legs chopped off or was beheaded. <!-- May be an idiom. I'm not too sure. Greatly appreciated if someone could check it. --> It dropped to the ground. Sasha launched the dagger at the fallen wolf, ending its life.
   
Gradually, the place once again fell into silence.
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Gradually, the place has once again fallen into silence.
   
 
“Why would a Gandálfr.....”
 
“Why would a Gandálfr.....”
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“Magic test?”
 
“Magic test?”
   
“Yes, that guy uses uncivilized magic.”
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“Yes, that guy uses uncivilized magic.
   
 
Uncivilized magic....that's an indicator that it's "void," right?
 
Uncivilized magic....that's an indicator that it's "void," right?
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Apologetically, the boy hurriedly rushed over.
 
Apologetically, the boy hurriedly rushed over.
   
“Aah,finally managed to get it to open. So-Sorry. I'm really sorry. My apologies.”
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“Aah,finally managed to get it to pen. So-Sorry. I'm really sorry. My apologies.”
   
 
Saito saw Sasha's shoulders tremble slightly. Then, her small throat emitted a high pitched, tangled sound:
 
Saito saw Sasha's shoulders tremble slightly. Then, her small throat emitted a high pitched, tangled sound:
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The boy dramatically rolled onto the ground. Sasha helped herself to his back.
 
The boy dramatically rolled onto the ground. Sasha helped herself to his back.
   
“I've said before, what have you and I both agreed on?”
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“I've said before, what have you and I both agreed on?
   
 
“Yes.....that's.....”
 
“Yes.....that's.....”
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Sasha hit the boy's head again.
 
Sasha hit the boy's head again.
   
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“Ah!”
“Ah”
 
   
“The next time I take a magic test, I won't make any arrangements?”
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“The next time I take a magic test, I won't make any arrangements?
   
 
“Yes....do that. In addition, be sure to rely on nobody else.....and I'll say that this isn't even a test.....this is the product of magic research──”
 
“Yes....do that. In addition, be sure to rely on nobody else.....and I'll say that this isn't even a test.....this is the product of magic research──”
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“No, I'm truly very sorry, but there was no other way. It's an important time right now, that barbarous.......”
 
“No, I'm truly very sorry, but there was no other way. It's an important time right now, that barbarous.......”
   
“I've said before that you don't have enough respect for living creatures. You really are a barbarian! I'm part of the noble Elven race, yet you turned me into a familiar. Due to that, you should be expressing much respect for me. But what did you do? Oh, try a test that destroys magic? I opened a teleportation door, and you immediately went to see?........"
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“I've said before that you don't have enough respect for living creatures. You really are a barbarian! I'm part of the noble Elven race, yet you turned me into a familiar. Due to that, you should be expressing much respect for me. But what did you do? Oh, try a test that destroys magic? I opened a teleportation door, and you immediately went to see?........"
   
“I had no other way. We're at a critical time right now. That violent and cruel Varyag......and there are only a handful of us. The only thing we can depend on would be a miraculous power, fighting with "magic."”
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“I had no other way. We're at a critical time right now. That violent and cruel <!--Note: I'm not certain about the translation for Valiag. The Chinese raws that I'm translating from are inconsistent with naming this. In Chapter 5, the characters are different and pronounced closer to 'Baliag', but they likely mean the same thing. It would be much appreciated if someone could check.--> Valiag......and there are only a handful of us. The only thing we can depend on would be a miraculous power, fighting with "magic."”
   
 
“What difference does it make to tell me that you were dealing with that Varyag!”
 
“What difference does it make to tell me that you were dealing with that Varyag!”
   
Witnessing this scene, Saito instinctively reminisced about a Gandálfr's relationship with his master. ( If they are truly in the Void situation, it's extremely similar.) Do things appear to be this way regardless of location? As long as it is related to the Void, women are scary for some reason, even if the situation was the complete opposite of his own.......
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Witnessing this scene, Saito instinctively reminisced about a Gandálfr's relationship with his master. ( If they are truly in the Void situation, it's extremely similar.) Do things appear to be this way regardless of location? As long as it is related to the Void, women are scary for some reason, even if the situation was the complete opposite of his own.......
   
''This person, who is in a place called Igustansea, is a Void user?''
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This person, who is in a place called Igustansea, is a Void user?
   
 
Saito coughed with an "oof." He then made his way towards them.
 
Saito coughed with an "oof." He then made his way towards them.
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[[Image: ZnT14-091.jpg|thumb]]
   
“There's.....something that I would like to ask you......”
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“There's.....something that I would like the ask you......”
   
Seeing Saito, the boy that Sasha sat on responded somewhat sheepishly:
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Seeing Saito, the boy that Sasha sat on responded somewhat sheepishly:
   
“Ah, nice to meet you. You are?”
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“Ah, nice to meet you. You are?
   
 
“My name is Saito. Hiraga Saito. I know my name is very weird.”
 
“My name is Saito. Hiraga Saito. I know my name is very weird.”
   
“Oh sorry, sorry, he and I are the same — we've got the same runes on our hands........”
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“Oh sorry, sorry, he and I are the same—we've got the same runes on our hands........”
   
“What!? You! Let me see that quick!”
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“What!? You! Let me see quick!”
   
 
The boy suddenly leapt up with a firm expression. Running towards Saito, he grabbed Saito's left hand.
 
The boy suddenly leapt up with a firm expression. Running towards Saito, he grabbed Saito's left hand.
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“It's impossible to accomplish that right now......., I don't even know what magic sent me here.....
 
“It's impossible to accomplish that right now......., I don't even know what magic sent me here.....
   
“This looks like,” The boy suddenly exclaimed with disappointment, but, at the same time, he smiled lightly.
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“This looks like, ” The boy suddenly exclaimed with disappointment, but, at the same time, he smiled lightly.
   
 
“Oh, come to think of it, I forgot to introduce myself. I am Brimir of Nidabelio.”
 
“Oh, come to think of it, I forgot to introduce myself. I am Brimir of Nidabelio.”
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“Co-Cou-Could you please repeat your name?”
 
“Co-Cou-Could you please repeat your name?”
   
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“Brimir of Nidabelio. Brimir Ru Rumiru Nidabelio.” <!-- Note: Nidabelio might actually be part of Brimir's full name. Translating from a Chinese edition, I can't be sure. I would love if if someone could check that for me. -->
“Brimir of Nidavellir. Brimir le Reimir Nidavellir.”
 
   
''Brimir
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Brimir
   
''Wait, wait wait.
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Wait, wait wait.
   
''That's....that's.....the mainland of Halkeginia's widely respected.....''
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That's....that's.....the mainland of Halkeginia's widely respected.....
   
 
“Founder Brimir's name”
 
“Founder Brimir's name”
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So....
 
So....
   
''No, how's that......
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No, how's that......
   
''How's that possible?
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How's that possible?
   
''Could it be alleged as impossible?
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Could it be alleged as impossible?
   
''In a world where magic is a part of people's daily lives.......a world where, unlike earth, magic exists, the existence of 'teleportation' magic isn't impossible.
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In a world where magic is a part of people's daily lives.......a world where, unlike earth, magic exists, the existence of 'teleportation' magic isn't impossible.
   
''Brimir himself.''
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Brimir himself.
   
 
Saito inevitably started staring at the boy before him. …..... A deity-like figure was really human too.
 
Saito inevitably started staring at the boy before him. …..... A deity-like figure was really human too.
   
This man also had a time he was young, the normal life he experienced... and the era he lived in.
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That person happened to be him in his youthful years, is living a regular life.....and is in the era that he lived in.
   
 
Right now, he was in Brimir's time........
 
Right now, he was in Brimir's time........
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“What has seriously happened? What is this anyways? ”
 
“What has seriously happened? What is this anyways? ”
   
Realizing the truth that would have made people faint a hundred times<ref>An idiom that expresses how shocking some information is.</ref>, Saito dropped to the floor in a kneel.
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Realizing the truth that would have made people faint a hundred times<ref>An idiom that expresses how shocking some information is.</ref>, Saito dropped to the floor in a kneel. <!--I seem to be having trouble with doing the translator note link properly. Much appreciation if someone could help with that. -->
   
   

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