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Palace of Versailles, at the Lutèce, Gallia's capital.
 
Palace of Versailles, at the Lutèce, Gallia's capital.
   
The one who stood out completely, within the magnificent palace in the Grand Troyes room made from blue bricks, in front of the guest who came from a foreign country, the Gallian king, Joseph, laughed out loud.
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The one who stood out completely within the magnificent palace, in the Grand Troyes room made from blue bricks, in front of the guest who came from a foreign country, the Gallian king, Joseph, laughed out loud.
   
 
The elf who was the guest, Lord Bidashal, did not reveal the slightest hint of a smile. Today, he had arrested the betrayer Knight of the Northern Parterre, and had brought her here.
 
The elf who was the guest, Lord Bidashal, did not reveal the slightest hint of a smile. Today, he had arrested the betrayer Knight of the Northern Parterre, and had brought her here.
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In a quiet voice, the tall elf said.
 
In a quiet voice, the tall elf said.
   
Although he was called a “barbarian,” Joseph did not feel resentful at all. Gallia was connected to the land the elves inhabited at the east frontier. There were contacts with the elves for a long time already... Those contacts could not be called amicable, but he had already gotten used to the contempt the elves had towards human beings.
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Although he was called a “barbarian,” Joseph did not feel resentful at all. Gallia is connected to the land the elves inhabit at the east frontier. There were contacts with the elves for a long time already... Those contacts could not be called amicable, but he had already gotten used to the contempt the elves had towards human beings.
   
 
“Is it 'Chieftain'? Err, is it 'Chief'? Anyway, you elect your leaders through a voting process, right? What a troublesome thing you are doing...”
 
“Is it 'Chieftain'? Err, is it 'Chief'? Anyway, you elect your leaders through a voting process, right? What a troublesome thing you are doing...”
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“The hundred year old Sahara at the other side, the rights to mining the Wind Stones, and the provision of various techniques and equipments.”
 
“The hundred year old Sahara at the other side, the rights to mining the Wind Stones, and the provision of various techniques and equipments.”
   
Wind Stones were something which made a boat fly in the air - an absolute necessity. The crystallization of the previous residents of the wind. There were lots of them sleeping in the Elf-controlled Sahara.
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Wind Stones are something which make a boat fly in the air - an absolute necessity. The crystallization of the previous residents of the wind. There are lots of them sleeping in the Elf-controlled Sahara.
   
And then, the technology of the elves who had cleared the Sahara desert and changed it into the place where they live; it far exceeded that of humans.
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And then, the technology of the elves who had cleared the Sahara desert and changed it into the place where they live; it far exceeds that of humans.
   
 
Those two provisions were certainly a really extraordinary proposal.
 
Those two provisions were certainly a really extraordinary proposal.
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As Joseph stroked Tabitha's face, he whispered,
 
As Joseph stroked Tabitha's face, he whispered,
   
“You were really good at chess, huh. Your moves couldn't be found anywhere else. That's why, Charles, ever since you were gone, my opponent has only been myself. I almost died of boredom and despair. Every day, it was like dancing barefooted on a thorn-layered carpet. Hey, Charles. This time the game is settled. Joining forces with the elves・demihumans, quashing the ideals and beliefs of human beings. This time, the chess board has surpassed Halkeginia, to the whole world containing Sahara・the elves' land and the Holy Land. Although it is “teaming up”, I think about the plans, and I direct them. The elves and the country, all are my chess pieces. How does that sound? I am great right? Charles...”
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“You are really good at chess, huh. Your moves cannot be found anywhere else. That's why, Charles, ever since you were gone, my opponent has only been myself. I almost died of boredom and despair. Every day, it was like dancing barefooted on a thorn-layered carpet. Hey, Charles. This time the game is settled. Joining forces with the elves・demihumans, quashing the ideals and beliefs of human beings. This time, the chess board has surpassed Halkeginia, to the whole world containing Sahara・the elves' land and the Holy Land. Although it is “teaming up”, I think about the plans, and I direct them. The elves and the country, all are my chess pieces. How does that sound? I am great right? Charles...”
   
 
In Tabitha's sleeping face, Joseph saw his younger brother.
 
In Tabitha's sleeping face, Joseph saw his younger brother.
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Joseph started reciting towards the sleeping Tabitha.
 
Joseph started reciting towards the sleeping Tabitha.
   
“Everyone wanted you to become the king. Charles, your magic skills surpassed everyone else. Yeah, you flew at the age of five. At seven, you managed to control fire completely. At eleven, you refined silver. At twelve, you understood the root of Water. I couldn't accomplish any of them, but you accomplished them easily.”
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“Everyone wants you to become the king. Charles, your magic skills surpassed everyone else. Yeah, you flew at the age of five. At seven, you managed to control fire completely. At eleven, you refined silver. At twelve, you understood the root of Water. I can't even accomplish any of them, but you accomplished them easily.”
   
 
Joseph gently stroked Tabitha's hair.
 
Joseph gently stroked Tabitha's hair.
   
“I suppose you don't know the feelings I had when I was watching you. Nah, you knew? You kept telling me this. ''“Elder brother, you haven't awakened yet. It's probably just because of that.”'' Looking at me who was regarded an idiot by the liege and father, you said this as well. ''“Elder brother, someday you will be able to do something great as well!”'' Worrying about me, losing to me on purpose. However, do you get it now? Every time I was touched by that kindness of yours, it didn't do anything save making me miserable.”
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“I suppose you don't know the feelings I had when I was watching you. Nah, you knew? You kept telling me this. ''“Elder brother, you haven't awakened yet. It's probably just because of that.”'' Looking at me who was regarded an idiot by the liege and father, you said this as well. ''“Elder brother, someday you will be able to do something great as well!”'' Worrying about me, losing to me on purpose. However, do you get it now? Every time I am touched by that kindness of yours, I didn't do anything save becoming miserable.”
   
 
Tears spilled from Joseph's eyes.
 
Tears spilled from Joseph's eyes.
   
“I could not help but be jealous at you. I became jealous at you who had the virtues and talents I had not. But there was no hate. Really. I didn't hate you to the extent of being able to do such a thing. Until that time...”
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“I could not help but be jealous at you. I became jealous at you who had the virtues and talents I do not. But there was no hate. Really. I don't hate you to the extent of being able to do such a thing. Until that time...”
   
 
Joseph closed his eyes.
 
Joseph closed his eyes.
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Nevertheless... the king, his father, chose him.
 
Nevertheless... the king, his father, chose him.
   
Within Joseph, sheer joy was born. Making him the successive king...his father had probably become dumb due to his sickness. Yet, the words of the king were absolute. He had become king.
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Within Joseph, sheer joy was born. Making him the successive king...his father had probably become dumb due to his sickness. Yet, the words of the king are absolute. He had become king.
   
 
The next emotion he had was...a sense of superiority towards Charles. Charles, the one who was said to be the proper king by everyone; how depressed did he feel?
 
The next emotion he had was...a sense of superiority towards Charles. Charles, the one who was said to be the proper king by everyone; how depressed did he feel?
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The one who had shot a poison arrow at the Duke of Orleans when he was out hunting, was Joseph himself.
 
The one who had shot a poison arrow at the Duke of Orleans when he was out hunting, was Joseph himself.
   
“...you had said it right. ''“Elder brother, you haven't awakened yet. It's probably just because of that.”'' I have woken up! It is the “Void”! It's the legend! Just like what you said! Yeah, you have told me this! ''“Elder brother, someday you will be able to do something great as well!”'' I am doing it! Making the world into a chess board, I am enjoying the game! Everything is just as you said! You're an awesome guy! You were really a great person! Charles!”
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“...you had said it right. ''“Elder brother, you haven't awakened yet. It's probably just because of that.”'' I have woken up! It is the “Void”! It's the legend! Just like what you said! Yeah, you have told me this! ''“Elder brother, someday you will be able to do something great as well!”'' I am doing it! Making the world into a chess board, I am enjoying the game! Everything is just as you said! You're an awesome guy! You are really a great person! Charles!”
   
 
After contemplating for a short while...Joseph touched Tabitha who was sleeping, on the lips.
 
After contemplating for a short while...Joseph touched Tabitha who was sleeping, on the lips.
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While pressing Tabitha's hands against his forehead, tears flowed from Joseph's eyes. As if he was repenting in front of a priest, Joseph painfully squeezed out his voice.
 
While pressing Tabitha's hands against his forehead, tears flowed from Joseph's eyes. As if he was repenting in front of a priest, Joseph painfully squeezed out his voice.
   
“Although I have hurt your beloved wife and daughter...it is still incomparable to the pain I felt that day. Even if I use the people in Halkeginia and torment them...it would still be incomparable to my remorse of that day.”
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“Although I have hurt your beloved wife and daughter...it is still incomparable to the pain I felt that day. Even if I use the people in Halkeginia and torment them...it is still incomparable to my remorse on that day.”
   
 
Slowly, Joseph stood up. Deep loathing resided within the eyes from which the tears of regret had vanished.
 
Slowly, Joseph stood up. Deep loathing resided within the eyes from which the tears of regret had vanished.

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