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“We have already learned the foolishness of deciding the leader through lineage since a long time ago. If you address him as 'king' and not 'chief,' it would be a great insult towards us.”
 
“We have already learned the foolishness of deciding the leader through lineage since a long time ago. If you address him as 'king' and not 'chief,' it would be a great insult towards us.”
   
“Well then, tell me about the intentions of Chief Tariq of the 'Nephthys,' Lord Bidashal.”
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“Well then, tell me about the intentions of Chief Turyuke<!--Check. "Tariq"?--> of the 'Neftes,' Lord Bidashal.”
   
 
With a formal address, he asked that of the elf envoy.”
 
With a formal address, he asked that of the elf envoy.”
   
“The 'Shaitan's Gate' we protect has become quite active lately.”
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“The 'Satan's Gate'<!--Check. Almost completely certain this should be "Shaitan"--> we protect has become quite active lately.”
   
 
“Is it something of the Holy Land?”
 
“Is it something of the Holy Land?”
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“The power depends on the user, it can become light or darkness. The power which had formerly destroyed our world. You all may think of it as the God's power, but for us, it is the demon's power. A symbol of darkness. Our prophecy is this - ''When the four demons gather, the power of the real demon will be awakened. The power of the true demon will probably bring about catastrophe once again.''”
 
“The power depends on the user, it can become light or darkness. The power which had formerly destroyed our world. You all may think of it as the God's power, but for us, it is the demon's power. A symbol of darkness. Our prophecy is this - ''When the four demons gather, the power of the real demon will be awakened. The power of the true demon will probably bring about catastrophe once again.''”
   
“It is worrisome for them to gather... is that it?”
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“It is worrisome for them to gather...is that it?”
   
 
“That's it. Ever since the great catastrophe six thousand years ago, a few times before this, the demon's powers had showed signs of gathering. Every time that happened, we were terrified. We wanted to secretly take away this 'Shaitan's Gate' which brought the catastrophe upon us. We wanted to bring it somewhere without any living beings. With that, the safety of the world would be preserved.”
 
“That's it. Ever since the great catastrophe six thousand years ago, a few times before this, the demon's powers had showed signs of gathering. Every time that happened, we were terrified. We wanted to secretly take away this 'Shaitan's Gate' which brought the catastrophe upon us. We wanted to bring it somewhere without any living beings. With that, the safety of the world would be preserved.”
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“...very well. I will serve you.”
 
“...very well. I will serve you.”
   
“Well then, step back. Go and tell Nephthys that I have understood.”
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“Well then, step back. Go and tell Neftes that I have understood.”
   
 
But, Lord Bidashal did not get up. His stare was fixed on Joseph.
 
But, Lord Bidashal did not get up. His stare was fixed on Joseph.
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“Speak.”
 
“Speak.”
   
“What are you thinking about? You wish for the peace and stability of the world, but looking at your demeanor and your face... I do not think so. Furthermore, the god you people believe in, the god and saint who is probably the foundation of the people you rule over... no matter how much you disbelieve it, we scorn him. Frankly speaking, we imagine this would cause a befitting quarrel. We expected it not to be an easy task. But why do you help us so readily?”
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“What are you thinking about? You wish for the peace and stability of the world, but looking at your demeanor and your face...I do not think so. Furthermore, the god you people believe in, the god and saint who is probably the foundation of the people you rule over...no matter how much you disbelieve it, we scorn him. Frankly speaking, we imagine this would cause a befitting quarrel. We expected it not to be an easy task. But why do you help us so readily?”
   
 
In a bored voice, Joseph replied.
 
In a bored voice, Joseph replied.
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Everyone in the palace thought that Charles, Duke of Orleans, would be appropriate as the next king. Even their mother, the queen, called her eldest son as an imbecile, and supported Charles as the king.
 
Everyone in the palace thought that Charles, Duke of Orleans, would be appropriate as the next king. Even their mother, the queen, called her eldest son as an imbecile, and supported Charles as the king.
   
Nevertheless... the king, his father, chose him.
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Nevertheless...the king, his father, chose him.
   
 
Within Joseph, sheer joy was born. Making him the successive king...his father had probably become dumb due to his sickness. Yet, the words of the king were absolute. He had become king.
 
Within Joseph, sheer joy was born. Making him the successive king...his father had probably become dumb due to his sickness. Yet, the words of the king were absolute. He had become king.

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