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Touma Kazusa was a girl who had a hard time looking at others.
 
Touma Kazusa was a girl who had a hard time looking at others.
   
"You look like you're about to cry..."<br />
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"Because I feel like I'm about to cry..."<br />
 
"........."
 
"........."
   
But that was because these weren't the eyes of a lonely wolf that rejected everything. It was more like, they were that of an abandoned dog who finally found a master. {{Furigana|&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;bait&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;|the forbidden fruit}}...
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But that was because these weren't the eyes of a lonely wolf that rejected everything. It was more like, they were that of an abandoned dog, who was fed {{Furigana|&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;bait&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;|the forbidden fruit}}...
   
 
"We're dating, aren't we? We're flirting, aren't we?"<br />
 
"We're dating, aren't we? We're flirting, aren't we?"<br />
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"Will I lose you one day? Will I part ways with you one day? Will I awaken from my dream one day...?"<br />
 
"Will I lose you one day? Will I part ways with you one day? Will I awaken from my dream one day...?"<br />
 
"Ah..."<br />
 
"Ah..."<br />
"That's what I've been thinking of all this time..."<br />
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"That's what I've felt like doing all this time, only thinking of just that..."<br />
 
"Kazusa..."
 
"Kazusa..."
   
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As a girl, it was an overreaction that she kept imagining of her loved one.
 
As a girl, it was an overreaction that she kept imagining of her loved one.
   
"Let's see... close your eyes"<br />
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"Let's see... close your eyes, okay?"<br />
 
"Nngh!"<br />
 
"Nngh!"<br />
"... you didn't even hesitate there, did you?"<br />
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"... why do you have to close your eyes so hard all of a sudden?"<br />
"Because......... you're gonna do it, right?"<br />
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"Because, because......... you're gonna, aren't you?"<br />
"Well, yeah."<br />
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"Well, sure."<br />
 
"So hurry... just finish it already..."<br />
 
"So hurry... just finish it already..."<br />
"Why do you have to kill the atmosphere?"<br />
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"Why do you have to say such things that kill the atmosphere?"<br />
"Because......... it, it's embarrassing!"
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"Because, because......... it, it's embarrassing!"
   
 
But, little by little...
 
But, little by little...

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