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Thank you for uploading the images, it sure saves me some trouble : ) [[User:Thatsjustpeachy|Thatsjustpeachy]] ([[User talk:Thatsjustpeachy|talk]]) 09:42, 15 November 2013 (CST) |
Thank you for uploading the images, it sure saves me some trouble : ) [[User:Thatsjustpeachy|Thatsjustpeachy]] ([[User talk:Thatsjustpeachy|talk]]) 09:42, 15 November 2013 (CST) |
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+ | Hello, I noticed some odd tense stuff and phrasing. (Also, I'm somewhat confused by British English). I would like to put some edits up for review. They are [https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0B8ZYOUCQuEcKQUVISmtYMER3eFE&usp=sharing here] (Also, you'd have to actually open the file and enter suggestion mode I believe to see what I edited). Um... I'd appreciate it if comment form and such was used on the documents themselves if you wanted to comment for the sake of preserving the original and keeping track of changes. |
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+ | :— [[User:Chronos5884|Chronos5884]] ([[User talk:Chronos5884|talk]]) 11:30, 8 August 2014 (CDT) |
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===Absolute Duo=== |
===Absolute Duo=== |
Revision as of 10:46, 2 September 2014
If there is something you want to tell me, you are welcome to write it here:
Snkr
If you want to edit the front page, please do so. It will be better if you can upload the illustrations too.--TJYYEO (talk) 05:45, 9 September 2013 (CDT)
http://www.baka-tsuki.org/project/index.php?title=Special:Upload Use the link above to upload.--TJYYEO (talk) 07:41, 9 September 2013 (CDT)
OK. I'll remember that from now on. -- Gulcasa766 20 September 2013
Thank you for uploading the images, it sure saves me some trouble : ) Thatsjustpeachy (talk) 09:42, 15 November 2013 (CST)
Hello, I noticed some odd tense stuff and phrasing. (Also, I'm somewhat confused by British English). I would like to put some edits up for review. They are here (Also, you'd have to actually open the file and enter suggestion mode I believe to see what I edited). Um... I'd appreciate it if comment form and such was used on the documents themselves if you wanted to comment for the sake of preserving the original and keeping track of changes.
- — Chronos5884 (talk) 11:30, 8 August 2014 (CDT)
Absolute Duo
What I was aiming for was to set the text in the narrative voice and using past participles; 'is' should be changed to 'was'. Recent events reads better than a strict "present" play-by-play reading in a story.
Riki probably intended it to be in the past; there are places where it switches between the two (and I don't mean in the dialog), I'm merely trying to keep it standard.--Drowzycow (talk) 18:47, 9 April 2014 (CDT)