User talk:OH&S

Just FYI, if you're testing things, you can use the "Show Preview" button instead of "Save Page" to test the result of the changes. --Cthaeh (talk) 09:10, 6 September 2013 (CDT)

I already know, but that wasn't why I was actually making the minor edits. I was testing to see how it looked on the bakareader ex app. I have to pass the changes through to see the results. Of course if there is a better way of checking this, I'm all ears.--OH&S (talk) 19:48, 6 September 2013 (CDT)

I replied to the continued conversation on my talk page. --Cthaeh (talk) 19:47, 18 September 2013 (CDT)

I don't know if you should change the layout of the project that much without getting a supervisor's approval. --Skies (talk) 04:32, 2 December 2013 (CST)

Thanks for the memo, and it wasn't much trouble anyway. It's good to know that the ToC works now. SonodaYuki (talk) 20:23, 6 December 2013 (CST)

Season 1/2 Volumes Translation Fixing: Feedback Section

All feedback on my edits should go in this section.--OH&S (talk) 03:05, 8 January 2014 (CST)

I may not be able to reply properly to further discussions at the moment, but here are my basic thoughts and some specific comments. --Cthaeh (talk) 19:45, 8 January 2014 (CST)

Furigana/Kanji

Given some of our pm’d discussions last year, my view here probably isn’t too surprising, but I don’t think a lot of the Kanji translations are necessary or relevant to include. You may have gone with the references form compared to the actual furigana template based on those earlier discussions, and it’s probably true that it’s less disruptive to reading this way. But there will still be some amount of disruption just from including references (the bolding also adds a little). The Kanji that I would consider relevant to readers is Illusion Destroyer (just because of Kamijou’s catchphrase “I’ll break/destroy your illusions”) and Church of Necessary Evil.--Cthaeh (talk) 19:45, 8 January 2014 (CST)

If you want to take a more democratic approach, we’d really need to solicit some other’s opinions. The only way to include the information without any disruption would be to put it on a separate page (ie. in a table sorted by volume and chapter of appearance), where anyone interested could look up the Kanji for the chapter they just read or were about to read. But the fact you’ve done the work to put it in the page likely means you personally want to include it directly on the page. Also, I almost hate to mention it, but there is also a way that it could be made so that the references or furigana don’t or do appear depending on user preference (technically it would be two different pages, but the actual text for editing and such would only be on a single page). I really don’t like the idea of doing all that work, and I might prefer to leave things as is over that alternative. The one thing I might want that solution for is if you really wanted to put the actual furigana template instead of references. But ideally we would avoid doing a splite preference/page solution. --Cthaeh (talk) 19:45, 8 January 2014 (CST)

Other comments

Other comments. --Cthaeh (talk) 19:45, 8 January 2014 (CST)

• I generally prefer to keep the references to explain things people wouldn’t know because they’re not Japanese, rather than they just might not know for other reasons. Therefore I would leave out things like the fact that true perfect memory doesn’t actually exist, since it’s just educating the readers about side-topics, rather than conferring something that was lost in translation. Another example would be the Latin; many readers may not know it, but that is unrelated to not being Japanese. Your new comments aren’t the only places this occurs, there’s quite a few references in later volumes that I would actually prefer to remove for that reason.
• Going back to the topic of perfect memory, I noticed you’ve changed that to “eidetic memory”, which is a proper name for the actual ability that occurs in the real world. This is an issue that I can’t really speak conclusively to without being a translator, but the way Index’s condition is described seems to exceed real-world eidetic memory. If the Japanese phrased used in the original isn’t the typical word for eidetic memory, then I might consider “perfect memory” to be a better translation because it doesn’t actually correspond to a real world phenomenon. Though this is all me guessing at the translation (based on your comment on Perfect Memorization Ability).

V1c1

• I don’t think adding in Index’s magic declaration is appropriate if it’s not the novel. The English novel readers won’t know it, but Kamichi didn’t consider it important enough to include in the novels so that’s fine. If you want to make it available to BT readers, then my preference would be to create a page for the Subete Guidebook translation.
• If Kamijou uses the word for police instead of “Anti-Skill”, then I think that should remain “police”. There was also an instance of ‘police’ to ‘Anti-Skill’ in c2 that I assume is the similar situation. (Also, if those were to remain as Anti-Skill, then I don’t think it is typically referred to as “the Anti-Skill”, so I’d say you’d remove ‘the’ from both those instances, but my primary opinion is that they be changed back to police).

V1c2

• I don’t think the romanji/pronunciations for magician and sorcerer are relevant information to include in the references, since that information isn’t relevant for reading the English language translation.
• I’ll just note that when I did my edits I used the upper case of Magic God, even though it went against my initial plans and general policy of matching js06’s lower case (I did that because nearly all but a couple of instances at the time were already upper case). At the time I did my edits, you commented in favor of upper case, so I was just a little surprised you switched to lower case here. I still support matching js06’s usage of lower case even though I didn’t do it, so I’m not complaining, but I was just a little surprised you did.

V1c3

• Lema vs Lama. Not commenting on the accuracy, just an fyi that there are 3 instances later in the series that should also be changed when you get to them.