User talk:Mickey
Done^^
It should be more understandable now (my translation skills still need a way lot of work). And thanks for constantly editing the chapter!
Ahh, so you are translating as well then! Haha, well, if you are using a japanese RAW, and my intepretation is different. Please change it.
I'm using a chinese RAW so yeah, more likely to be wrong.
And, I've reworded the sentence an incy-tiny bit. Maybe now it's easier to see what on earth the is going on. If not, just shoot me a message :)
~Xorius
Well,
I'm going to be dropping this chapter as a DONE now so yeah, I'll count on you to edit it :P
By the way, if I may dare ask, mind checking through my chapters as I work along it? I'm working on Volume 7, Chapter 5 personally. If it's not too much trouble of course. Don't have official editor so to speak at the moment haha.
~Xorius