User talk:Delwack

Clannad Full Edit Pass

SCENES HISTORY AND LOG

This is a copy of the main table, but not linked to it so I can keep track of my editing progress. Let's hope I get through a couple of routes before I get burned out >.>

Note: Doki has picked up this project. see announcement at [1]

I will no longer be updating this table here.

Strike = Finished editing pass on entire scene. * = partially completed

	Main	Fuko	Tomoyo	Kyou	Kotomi	Yukine	Nagisa	After	Others
April 14	SEEN0414*							SEEN6800	Sanae's Scenario	SEEN7000
April 15	SEEN0415*		SEEN2415*	SEEN3415	SEEN4415			SEEN6801
April 16	SEEN0416*		SEEN2416	SEEN3416			SEEN6416	SEEN6802	Yuusuke's Scenario	SEEN7100
April 17	SEEN0417*	SEEN1417	SEEN2417	SEEN3417	SEEN4417		SEEN6417	SEEN6803
April 18	SEEN0418*	SEEN1418	SEEN2418	SEEN3418*	SEEN4418	SEEN5418	SEEN6418	SEEN6900*	Akio's Scenario	SEEN7200
April 19	SEEN0419*		SEEN2419	SEEN3419	SEEN4419	SEEN5419	SEEN6419
April 20	SEEN0420*				SEEN4420		SEEN6420		Koumura's Scenario	SEEN7300
April 21	SEEN0421*	SEEN1421	SEEN2421	SEEN3421*	SEEN4421	SEEN5421	SEEN6421	Interlude
April 22	SEEN0422	SEEN1422	SEEN2422	SEEN3422	SEEN4422	SEEN5422	SEEN6422	SEEN6444	Sunoharas' Scenario	SEEN7400
April 23	SEEN0423	SEEN1423	SEEN2423	SEEN3423	SEEN4423	SEEN5423	SEEN6423	SEEN6445
April 24	SEEN0424		SEEN2424	SEEN3424	SEEN4424	SEEN5424	SEEN6424		Misae's Scenario	SEEN7500
April 25	SEEN0425		SEEN2425	SEEN3425	SEEN4425	SEEN5425	SEEN6425	Mei & Nagisa
April 26	SEEN0426	SEEN1426	SEEN2426	SEEN3426	SEEN4426	SEEN5426	SEEN6426	SEEN6726	Kappei's Scenario	SEEN7600*
April 27		SEEN1427			SEEN4427		SEEN6427	SEEN6727
April 28	SEEN0428	SEEN1428	SEEN2428	SEEN3428	SEEN4428	SEEN5428	SEEN6428	SEEN6728
April 29	SEEN0429	SEEN1429		SEEN3429	SEEN4429		SEEN6429	SEEN6729
April 30		SEEN1430	SEEN2430	SEEN3430	SEEN4430	SEEN5430	SEEN6430		BAD End 1	SEEN0444
May 1		SEEN1501	SEEN2501	SEEN3501	SEEN4501		SEEN6501		Gamebook	SEEN0555
May 2		SEEN1502	SEEN2502	SEEN3502	SEEN4502		SEEN6502		BAD End 2	SEEN0666
May 3		SEEN1503	SEEN2503	SEEN3503	SEEN4503		SEEN6503
May 4		SEEN1504	SEEN2504	SEEN3504	SEEN4504		SEEN6504
May 5		SEEN1505	SEEN2505	SEEN3505	SEEN4505		SEEN6505
May 6		SEEN1506	SEEN2506	SEEN3506	SEEN4506		SEEN6506
May 7		SEEN1507	SEEN2507	SEEN3507	SEEN4507		SEEN6507
May 8		SEEN1508	SEEN2508	SEEN3508	SEEN4508		SEEN6508		Kyou's After Scene	SEEN3001
May 9			SEEN2509	SEEN3509	SEEN4509
May 10			SEEN2510	SEEN3510	SEEN4510		SEEN6510
May 11		SEEN1511	SEEN2511	SEEN3511	SEEN4511		SEEN6511		Fuko Master	SEEN1001
May 12		SEEN1512		SEEN3512	SEEN4512		SEEN6512			SEEN1002
May 13		SEEN1513	SEEN2513	SEEN3513*	SEEN4513		SEEN6513			SEEN1003
May 14		SEEN1514	SEEN2514	SEEN3514	EPILOGUE		SEEN6514			SEEN1004
May 15		SEEN1515			SEEN4800					SEEN1005
May 16		SEEN1516			BAD END					SEEN1006
May 17		SEEN1517			SEEN4904					SEEN1008
May 18		SEEN1518			SEEN4999					SEEN1009
--									Misc. Fragments	SEEN0001
										SEEN9030
										SEEN9032
										SEEN9033
										SEEN9034
										SEEN9042
										SEEN9071
										SEEN9074
										SEEN9524

Most partials are due to the fact that I'm editing the text as I play through each route/area to have the visual and voice context. I'm tackling one route at a time.

Currently Route: Kyou

Re: Thinking about going through a full editing pass for certain routes

Hi Delwack, thank you for your hard work! I've had a quick look through your edits; you have a good grasp on the natural flow of English. Thank you also for your detailed comments (e.g. SEEN0414) -- they do highlight things we've missed before. I apologize that I can't afford the time to join you in editing and discussions just yet, but I'll address your comments one by one when I'm free, from 21 June onward.

As for route selection, I'm happy with your approach (it's basically what I did myself when I started). Manpower is down, so please continue with what you're able to do (or, you can wait until I'm back, if that will help you to avoid burning out). Just one request: If you change the contents of a line significantly (e.g. line <0287> in SEEN3513), please leave the old line in a comment -- it helps to highlight the lines that need TL checking. Don't worry about what you've already changed though, as we do have a full log of changes.

I'm hoping for a speedy completion of the project too. There's a possibility of collaborating with Doki Fansubs to accelerate things, but it hasn't been finalised yet.

Thanks again!

Polarem 13:22, 26 May 2012 (CDT)

Working in a full VN translation team

Hi Delwack, thanks again for your recent efforts. A fansubbing/VN-translation group has offered to put their full weight behind the project, and I have decided to transfer management over to them, and work under them, as I believe this will lead to a much faster completion of the Clannad translation. In light of your enthusiasm for Clannad and the quality of your recent edits, we'd like to invite you to join the team too. Please let me know your answer. If you wish to contact me privately, you can email me