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According to the speculation of scientists, this dragon might be mutated from a blue whale.
 
According to the speculation of scientists, this dragon might be mutated from a blue whale.
   
Indeed, with front flippers, tail fins and an air hole on it's back, it shared the same characteristics as marine mammals. However, it definitely did not look like the same type of creature.
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Indeed, with front flippers, tail fins and an air hole on its back, it shared the same characteristics as marine mammals. However, it definitely did not look like the same type of creature.
   
 
Covered all over by a white outer shell, it had a giant horn on its head and rows of sharp teeth like a carnivorous predator, not something one could still consider the same species as the blue whale.
 
Covered all over by a white outer shell, it had a giant horn on its head and rows of sharp teeth like a carnivorous predator, not something one could still consider the same species as the blue whale.
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"Is it really okay... for me to come along?"
 
"Is it really okay... for me to come along?"
   
"That's actually the safest way. As long as you stay at my side, Iris, I won't let you die—until the moment I decide to kill you."
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"That's actually the safest way. As long as you stay at my side, Iris, I won't let you die—until the moment I decided to kill you."
   
 
"Ooh... You're not allowed to say something like that!"
 
"Ooh... You're not allowed to say something like that!"
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On further thought, they were too weak, after all.
 
On further thought, they were too weak, after all.
   
I took another look. Their equipment was different too. Members of Sleipnir were supposed to be equipped with MP Nergal, but I could not see that kind of gun among these guys' equipment.
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I took another look. Their equipment was different too. Members of Sleipnir were supposed to be equipped with MP Nergal, but I coudl not see that kind of gun among these guys' equipment.
   
 
It looked like they were not the people sent by Major Loki.
 
It looked like they were not the people sent by Major Loki.
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Mitsuki gazed down at me and explained the situation calmly.
 
Mitsuki gazed down at me and explained the situation calmly.
   
"Whether poison that would spread from a single hit or a chain of attacks, Leviathan would slice off parts of it's body to neutralize them. It is most likely using multiple repulsive fields to create spatial discontinuities to gouge it own body. Since its body is so humongous, it only results in trivial scratches."
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"Whether poison that would spread from a single hit or a chain of attacks, Leviathan would slice off parts of its body to neutralize them. It is most likely using multiple repulsive fields to create spatial discontinuities to gouge it own body. Since its body is so humongous, it only results in trivial scratches."
   
 
"No other methods... are effective?"
 
"No other methods... are effective?"
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"Nii-san, you will get hurt if you continue to resist. First arrow—Forked Wind!"
 
"Nii-san, you will get hurt if you continue to resist. First arrow—Forked Wind!"
   
Probably deciding it was impossible to capture me without causing injury, Mitsuki's gaze changed. She looked like she intended to use her prized technique.
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Probably deciding it was impossible to capture me without causing injury, Mitsuki's gaze changed. She looked like she intended to use her prided technique.
   
 
While Mitsuki shot the arrow, the atmosphere's flow changed. The air gradually contracted. I tried to judge their number through wind currents, but the number of contraction points were too many for me to grasp completely.
 
While Mitsuki shot the arrow, the atmosphere's flow changed. The air gradually contracted. I tried to judge their number through wind currents, but the number of contraction points were too many for me to grasp completely.
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Perhaps it was advancing quite quickly. The figure grew huge in the blink of an eye.
 
Perhaps it was advancing quite quickly. The figure grew huge in the blink of an eye.
   
Because it was too massive, it was hard to judge the distance. It's outer shell of pure white was dotted with red, probably bleeding from the wounds caused by Midgardsormr and the Dragon Subjugation Squad.
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Because it was too massive, it was hard to judge the distance. Its outer shell of pure white was dotted with red, probably bleeding from the wounds caused by Midgardsormr and the Dragon Subjugation Squad.
   
 
Uooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
 
Uooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
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BOOM!!
 
BOOM!!
   
The atmosphere was distorted by the heavy cannon's rumbling. A bullet of blue-white light was fired. It was a weapon of annihilation that caused everything caught in it's blast to disintegrate on the atomic level.
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The atmosphere was distorted by the heavy cannon's rumbling. A bullet of blue-white light was fired. It was a weapon of annihilation that caused everything caught in its blast to disintegrate on the atomic level.
   
 
In the past, Hekatonkheir had instantly turned into dust after being struck by this bullet.
 
In the past, Hekatonkheir had instantly turned into dust after being struck by this bullet.
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Due to Hekatonkheir's trait of immortality, even though it revived several hundred kilometers away afterwards, this weapon's firepower was guaranteed.
 
Due to Hekatonkheir's trait of immortality, even though it revived several hundred kilometers away afterwards, this weapon's firepower was guaranteed.
   
The blue bullet flew towards Leviathan in a straight line, but the instant before striking—It's path was altered from spatial distortion, deviating to the lower left.
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The blue bullet flew towards Leviathan in a straight line, but the instant before striking—Its path was altered from spatial distortion, deviating to the lower left.
   
 
In that very instant, blinding blue light erupted. This was because I had adjusted the energy compression ratio while firing. Even if it failed to strike, it would still explode next to Leviathan.
 
In that very instant, blinding blue light erupted. This was because I had adjusted the energy compression ratio while firing. Even if it failed to strike, it would still explode next to Leviathan.
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Angry roar was heard from the light, making me realize I had failed just when victory was in sight again.
 
Angry roar was heard from the light, making me realize I had failed just when victory was in sight again.
   
The white monster emerged, breaking through the blue light and the cloud of water vapor. The left side of it's outer shell was almost completely blown away, exposing muscle. Even so, it's movements did not seem impeded. Swaying its body, Leviathan swam in the air, approaching the final defensive line.
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The white monster emerged, breaking through the blue light and the cloud of water vapor. The left side of its outer shell was almost completely blown away, exposing muscle. Even so, its movements did not seem impeded. Swaying its body, Leviathan swam in the air, approaching the final defensive line.
   
 
No longer concerned with the intercepting lasers, it headed straight for here, where Iris was.
 
No longer concerned with the intercepting lasers, it headed straight for here, where Iris was.
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Uooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!
 
Uooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!
   
Even it's roaring deathcry was dragged into the spatial discontinuity, it's voice growing progressively weaker.
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Even its roaring deathcry was dragged into the spatial discontinuity, its voice growing progressively weaker.
   
 
After devouring the giant dragon and the antimatter explosions, the space closed up.
 
After devouring the giant dragon and the antimatter explosions, the space closed up.

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