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===Part 4===
 
===Part 4===
   
The next day—
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The next day—
   
 
"Kyah, Jeanne-samaaaaa!"
 
"Kyah, Jeanne-samaaaaa!"
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Iris murmured emotionally and Mitsuki nodded.
 
Iris murmured emotionally and Mitsuki nodded.
   
"Yes—But we have no choice but to let Jeanne-san go first. We have no means of driving away the students blocking the dorm entrance. Yesterday, we made use of a back entrance... But a similar solution will not work for going to school."
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"Yes—But we have no choice but to let Jeanne-san go first. We have no means of driving away the students blocking the dorm entrance. Yesterday, we made use of a back entrance... But a similar solution will not work for going to school."
   
 
Mitsuki deemed this the ideal solution but Ariella had doubts.
 
Mitsuki deemed this the ideal solution but Ariella had doubts.
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Durign the battle last time, Ariella had taken NIFL's side and invaded the school while destroying partitions along the underground passages.
 
Durign the battle last time, Ariella had taken NIFL's side and invaded the school while destroying partitions along the underground passages.
   
"—Ariella-san, you have already written your repentance essays, so there is no need for further apologies. I really wish Kili-san could learn well from you."
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"—Areilla-san, you have already written your repentance essays, so there is no need for further apologies. I really wish Kili-san could learn well from you."
   
 
Mitsuki looked at Kili with a wry smile.
 
Mitsuki looked at Kili with a wry smile.
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I looked back to see Ren looking up at me regretfully.
 
I looked back to see Ren looking up at me regretfully.
   
"Onii-chan, unfortunately—It's getting worse."
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"Onii-chan, unfortunately—It's getting worse."
   
 
Saying that, Ren showed me the screen of her portable terminal, which had posts like "Jeanne-sama is the best!" or "Jeanne-sama is currently heading to school."
 
Saying that, Ren showed me the screen of her portable terminal, which had posts like "Jeanne-sama is the best!" or "Jeanne-sama is currently heading to school."
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Ren scrolled the screen, showing the content about Jeanne. Firill was also looking at the screen from behind us.
 
Ren scrolled the screen, showing the content about Jeanne. Firill was also looking at the screen from behind us.
   
"—So it's true. So much activity. If this continues, rather than subsiding, things might get even more heated instead."
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"—So it's true. So much activity. If this continues, rather than subsiding, things might get even more heated instead."
   
 
Hearing Firill's comment, Shion said with flowing tears, "tHIs wiLl kEeP goInG...?"
 
Hearing Firill's comment, Shion said with flowing tears, "tHIs wiLl kEeP goInG...?"
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"Firill-san, you have been admonished," said Lisa while smiling wryly.
 
"Firill-san, you have been admonished," said Lisa while smiling wryly.
   
"—However, optimism isn't going to bring about a solution. We need to think of something."
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"—However, optimism isn't going to bring about a solution. We need to think of something."
   
 
Lisa spoke with a solemn expression but she simply repeated Kili's suggestion of "not wearing male clothes" from yesterday. However, Jeanne herself had resisted vehemently.
 
Lisa spoke with a solemn expression but she simply repeated Kili's suggestion of "not wearing male clothes" from yesterday. However, Jeanne herself had resisted vehemently.
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But for Jeanne, there was no time for poignant reactions.
 
But for Jeanne, there was no time for poignant reactions.
   
On the fifth day of her transfer—Jeanne managed just barely to get home in time for dinner today.
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On the fifth day of her transfer—Jeanne managed just barely to get home in time for dinner today.
   
 
Dragging her body, all covered with twigs and leaves, she looked rather haggard while eating dinner.
 
Dragging her body, all covered with twigs and leaves, she looked rather haggard while eating dinner.
   
—I must do something. But... what?
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—I must do something. But... what?
   
 
Lying on my bed after dinner, I contemplated.
 
Lying on my bed after dinner, I contemplated.
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Living in the floor above, Mitsuki never made any loud noises, so there was nothing to disrupt my thoughts.
 
Living in the floor above, Mitsuki never made any loud noises, so there was nothing to disrupt my thoughts.
   
—The problem was that Jeanne personally rejecting their advances had been completely futile.
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—The problem was that Jeanne personally rejecting their advances had been completely futile.
   
 
Due to the collective mentality, the girls had gone out of control, ignoring Jeanne's own wishes. Persuading with logic and reason was probably out of the question.
 
Due to the collective mentality, the girls had gone out of control, ignoring Jeanne's own wishes. Persuading with logic and reason was probably out of the question.
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I got off the bed and walked to the door. Back when it was just Mitsuki and I living in this dorm, I basically never locked the door. Since Mitsuki held the master key, locking was pointless.
 
I got off the bed and walked to the door. Back when it was just Mitsuki and I living in this dorm, I basically never locked the door. Since Mitsuki held the master key, locking was pointless.
   
However, now that the number of residents had increased all at once, with people among them whom I must be careful with—well, mainly Kili—I currently had the door locked.
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However, now that the number of residents had increased all at once, with people among them whom I must be careful with—well, mainly Kili—I currently had the door locked.
   
 
"Sorry, it is already this late..."
 
"Sorry, it is already this late..."
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"Zwei was already very sleepy, so I had her brush her teeth and go to bed."
 
"Zwei was already very sleepy, so I had her brush her teeth and go to bed."
   
"Then it should be fine. Come—please enter."
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"Then it should be fine. Come—please enter."
   
 
"P-Pardon the intrusion..."
 
"P-Pardon the intrusion..."
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However, Jeanne shook her head and stood in front of me.
 
However, Jeanne shook her head and stood in front of me.
   
"Well, if that's your preference, Jeanne—What do you want to talk about? Does it have anythiing to do with what you're carrying?"
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"Well, if that's your preference, Jeanne—What do you want to talk about? Does it have anythiing to do with what you're carrying?"
   
 
I pointed at the plastic bag that she seemed quite conscious of. Jeanne nodded.
 
I pointed at the plastic bag that she seemed quite conscious of. Jeanne nodded.
   
"Yes, indeed! Actually—this was the school uniform issued to me initially."
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"Yes, indeed! Actually—this was the school uniform issued to me initially."
   
 
Saying that, Jeanne took out the contents.
 
Saying that, Jeanne took out the contents.
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When I asked that, Jeanne shook her head.
 
When I asked that, Jeanne shook her head.
   
"Umm... No, I still haven't made up my mind, which is why I came to discuss with you, Captain... Last time when you said this uniform would look good on me... I denied it... Oh, no, I know you were joking at the time... But—"
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"Umm... No, I still haven't made up my mind, which is why I came to discuss with you, Captain... Last time when you said this uniform would look good on me... I denied it... Oh, no, I know you were joking at the time... But—"
   
 
"I wasn't joking, by the way... Why did you think I was joking?"
 
"I wasn't joking, by the way... Why did you think I was joking?"
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I frowned and asked Jeanne. I did not know the reason for her inferiority complex.
 
I frowned and asked Jeanne. I did not know the reason for her inferiority complex.
   
"Hmm—I've always dressed as a man and worked hard like a man... It must be very weird for someone like that to suddenly dress up as a girl, deserving of ridicule..."
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"Hmm—I've always dressed as a man and worked hard like a man... It must be very weird for someone like that to suddenly dress up as a girl, deserving of ridicule..."
   
 
Hearing that from Jeanne, I sighed deeply.
 
Hearing that from Jeanne, I sighed deeply.
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"Ehhh!? Aren't they drawn to the manliness I've developed over the years...?"
 
"Ehhh!? Aren't they drawn to the manliness I've developed over the years...?"
   
"Uh, Jeanne... I'm sorry I have to tell you this, but—"
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"Uh, Jeanne... I'm sorry I have to tell you this, but—"
   
 
I told the truth to Jeanne who did not know herself.
 
I told the truth to Jeanne who did not know herself.
   
"Back when we were working in the same team—You were a brave and intelligent subordinate. It might be okay to call this part as being like a man... But as for manliness, to be honest, you have none of that at all. You give off too strong a sense of purity."
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"Back when we were working in the same team—You were a brave and intelligent subordinate. It might be okay to call this part as being like a man... But as for manliness, to be honest, you have none of that at all. You give off too strong a sense of purity."
   
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"What—"
"What—"
 
   
 
Speechless, Jeanne dropped the uniform in her hands. Seeing her more shocked than I expected, I hastily continued.
 
Speechless, Jeanne dropped the uniform in her hands. Seeing her more shocked than I expected, I hastily continued.
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"Th-Then... Is it okay for you to look at me in female uniform and tell me if I look weird or not?"
 
"Th-Then... Is it okay for you to look at me in female uniform and tell me if I look weird or not?"
   
"Of course—Eh, right here?"
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"Of course—Eh, right here?"
   
 
I nodded on reflex then gasped.
 
I nodded on reflex then gasped.
   
"Yes... I will change in the washroom..."
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"Yes... I will cahnge in the washroom..."
   
 
Picking up the uniform on the ground, Jeanne peered at my face with a blush.
 
Picking up the uniform on the ground, Jeanne peered at my face with a blush.
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"Please wait, Captain."
 
"Please wait, Captain."
   
Saying that, Jeanne went into the washroom. Inside the quiet room, I could hear faint sounds from the washroom.
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Saying that, Jeanne went into the washroom. Inside the queit room, I could hear faint sounds from the washroom.
   
—What am I getting nervous for?
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—What am I getting nervous for?
   
 
Sitting on the bed's edge, I scratched my head anxiously.
 
Sitting on the bed's edge, I scratched my head anxiously.
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However, despite the opened door, she was nowhere to be seen.
 
However, despite the opened door, she was nowhere to be seen.
   
"S-Sorry, I am a bit nervous... I-I am coming out now!"
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"S-Sorry, I am a bit nervous... I-I am comng out now!"
   
 
Despite the determination in her voice, time went by and she still had not turned her words into action.
 
Despite the determination in her voice, time went by and she still had not turned her words into action.
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"Can I open my eyes now?"
 
"Can I open my eyes now?"
   
Noting to myself how much this resembled hide-and-seek, I confirmed with Jeanne. Well—since she was moving from a hidden state to enter my presence, it would be the opposite of hide-and-seek.
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Noting to myself how much this resembled hide-and-seek, I confirmed with Jeanne. Well—since she was moving from a hidden state to enter my presence, it would be the opposite of hide-and-seek.
   
 
"Yes, please go ahead."
 
"Yes, please go ahead."
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Hearing Jeanne's stiff reply, I slowly opened my eyes.
 
Hearing Jeanne's stiff reply, I slowly opened my eyes.
   
Since it was sitting on the bed's edge, my vantage point was quite low. The first thing I saw was her skirt and the pale thighs extending from underneath—
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Since it was sitting on the bed's edge, my vantage point was quite low. The first thing I saw was her skirt and the pale thighs extending from underneath—
   
 
"I-I can't do this after all!"
 
"I-I can't do this after all!"
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With that, I was pushed back onto the bed. Pinning me down, Jeanne continued to cover my eyes with her hands.
 
With that, I was pushed back onto the bed. Pinning me down, Jeanne continued to cover my eyes with her hands.
   
"Ah, wawawa, w-what am I doing to the Captain—S-Sorry! I am terribly sorry!"
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"Ah, wawawa, w-what am I doing to the Captain—S-Sorry! I am terribly sorry!"
   
 
"I-If you really mean it, hurry and back away!"
 
"I-If you really mean it, hurry and back away!"
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My gaze settled on Jeanne in her female uniform.
 
My gaze settled on Jeanne in her female uniform.
   
This outfit emphasized what the male uniform could not—her ample bust, narrow waist and the pale thighs exposed beneath her skirt.
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This outfit emphasized what the male uniform could not—her ample bust, narrow waist and the pale thighs exposed beneath her skirt.
   
 
"Ah, wa, wa..."
 
"Ah, wa, wa..."
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With her mouth gaping open, Jeanne's face turned pink like the color of a fully ripened peach. With her usual ponytail untied and tears welling up in her eyes, she looked exceptionally adorable.
 
With her mouth gaping open, Jeanne's face turned pink like the color of a fully ripened peach. With her usual ponytail untied and tears welling up in her eyes, she looked exceptionally adorable.
   
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Also—
Also—
 
   
"—See, what a pretty girl as expected."
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"—See, what a pretty girl as expected."
   
 
I looked up at the panicking Jeanne and told her in reassurance.
 
I looked up at the panicking Jeanne and told her in reassurance.
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But under these circumstances, it seemed to have the opposite effect. Jeanne's face began to boil while her tears started to fall.
 
But under these circumstances, it seemed to have the opposite effect. Jeanne's face began to boil while her tears started to fall.
   
"S-Sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry—"
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"S-Sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry—"
   
 
I frantically released her hands and apologized.
 
I frantically released her hands and apologized.
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I said that but Jeanne did not accept.
 
I said that but Jeanne did not accept.
   
"I still mind even if you say that! Please punish me—Please impose punishment upon me!"
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"I still mind even if you say that! Please punish me—Please impose punishment upon me!"
   
 
"By punishment... You mean like getting spanked?"
 
"By punishment... You mean like getting spanked?"
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Seeing Jeanne trembling while bending over and lifting her bottom, my mind blanked out.
 
Seeing Jeanne trembling while bending over and lifting her bottom, my mind blanked out.
   
"N-No! That's not what I intended—!"
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"N-No! That's not what I intended—!"
   
"Eh...!? Don't tell me you want me to roll up my skirt too!? Umm, actually, I forgot to bring female underwear... Oh no, that's wrong, I do have some prepared in my room—But right now, I'm not wearing any—"
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"Eh...!? Don't tell me you want me to roll up my skirt too!? Umm, actually, I forgot to bring female underwear... Oh no, that's wrong, I do have some prepared in my room—But right now, I'm not wearing any—"
   
 
"What..."
 
"What..."
   
After learning the reason why Jeanne was holding down her skirt, I could not help but look at the boundary between her skirt and those pale thighs. Under there was—
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After learning the reason why Jeanne was holding down her skirt, I could not help but look at the boundary between her skirt and those pale thighs. Under there was—
   
 
"Umm, if it's the Captain's orders, I shall...!"
 
"Umm, if it's the Captain's orders, I shall...!"
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However, while pushing down her skirt, my hand also grabbed her bottom through the fabric at the same time.
 
However, while pushing down her skirt, my hand also grabbed her bottom through the fabric at the same time.
   
The unimaginable softness was transmitted through my hand—At the same time, Jeanne's body kept shaking.
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The unimaginable softness was transmitted through my hand—At the same time, Jeanne's body kept shaking.
   
"Mmm—C-Captain—This is kind of sudden—"
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"Mmm—C-Captain—This is kind of sudden—"
   
 
"S-Sorry!"
 
"S-Sorry!"
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Since Jeanne called what happened a punishment, there was no need for me to go out of my way to correct her.
 
Since Jeanne called what happened a punishment, there was no need for me to go out of my way to correct her.
   
"Very well—I understand! Thank you very much!"
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"Very well—I understand! Thank you very much!"
   
 
Saluting to me, Jeanne fled to the washroom, picked up her male uniform in her arms and ran out of my room.
 
Saluting to me, Jeanne fled to the washroom, picked up her male uniform in her arms and ran out of my room.
   
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"Phew—"
"Phew—"
 
   
 
I exhaled deeply and lay down on my bed.
 
I exhaled deeply and lay down on my bed.

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