Editing Unlimited Fafnir:Volume 10 Chapter 2

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I nodded and shared my opinion, causing Ariella to blush suddenly.
 
I nodded and shared my opinion, causing Ariella to blush suddenly.
   
"N-No need for flattery! I know I'm not very girly, okay!"
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"N-No need for flattery! I know I'm not very girl, okay!"
   
"Huh? That's not what I think. You've got a great figure, and—"
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"Huh? That's not what I'm thinking. You've got a great figure, and—"
   
 
I was about to point out the location of Ariella's charm, but immediately stopped myself. Mitsuki was staring in my direction. I could sense it without even looking back.
 
I was about to point out the location of Ariella's charm, but immediately stopped myself. Mitsuki was staring in my direction. I could sense it without even looking back.
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Realizing the danger in following the usual pattern and getting scolded, I sighed.
 
Realizing the danger in following the usual pattern and getting scolded, I sighed.
   
"Sexual harassment... What the heck were you going to say? Now that you've said this much, I'm very curious."
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"Sexual harassment... What the heck were you going to say? Now that you've said this much, it makes me curious."
   
 
However, Ariella glared at me with dissatisfaction.
 
However, Ariella glared at me with dissatisfaction.
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Since she said so, I leaned in close to Ariella's ear.
 
Since she said so, I leaned in close to Ariella's ear.
   
"—Ariella, I find your legs particularly pretty. During the battle, I had a really tough time trying to keep my attention away from them."
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"—Ariella, your legs are particularly attractive. During the battle, it really took me a lot of effort to keep my attention off your legs."
   
 
After I said that, Ariella went totally red to her ears.
 
After I said that, Ariella went totally red to her ears.

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