Editing The World God Only Knows:Volume 1 Chapter 4

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“It’s not just an expression.”
 
“It’s not just an expression.”
   
She said to Keima, who in turn nodded his head.
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She said to Keima, who in turn nodded her head.
   
 
“I know.”
 
“I know.”
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Keima plainly stated.
 
Keima plainly stated.
   
“I...”
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“I.”
   
 
He stated casually,
 
He stated casually,
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“Un…it’s nice to download this morning breakfast event, but the voice recognition device still can’t work. This will be bad for conquest. Got to let the manufacturer correct it. Hm?”
 
“Un…it’s nice to download this morning breakfast event, but the voice recognition device still can’t work. This will be bad for conquest. Got to let the manufacturer correct it. Hm?”
   
At this moment, Keima finally noticed that Yoshino Asami was staring at him blankly. After glancing at her, the first thing Keima said was,
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At this moment, Keima finally noticed that Yoshino Asami was staring at her blankly. After glancing at her, the first thing Keima said was,
   
 
“Hey, you’re here?”
 
“Hey, you’re here?”
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“…I don’t feel like changing clothes. What about you?”
 
“…I don’t feel like changing clothes. What about you?”
   
(This is a facility that only allows access after getting into cosplay.)
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(This is a facility that only allows access after getting into cosplay.
   
 
Yoshino Asami blinked her eyes and blushed.
 
Yoshino Asami blinked her eyes and blushed.
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Keima’s eyes were showing sincere light.
 
Keima’s eyes were showing sincere light.
   
Perhaps it was concern for the girl who seemed similar to him but was in fact not. He said,
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Perhaps it was concern for the girl who seemed similar to her but was in fact not. He said,
   
 
“Aren’t they here? Don’t you have a sister who’s thinking of you no matter what? Who says that you can’t live normally with people?”
 
“Aren’t they here? Don’t you have a sister who’s thinking of you no matter what? Who says that you can’t live normally with people?”
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She really felt like playing tricks on him.
 
She really felt like playing tricks on him.
   
Thus, she continued to act an angel. She felt that the boy was trying to make a good impression, and that if she continued to talk about things from her own imaginary world, he would run away eventually. The other guys were like this without exception.
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Thus, she continued to act an angel. She felt that the boy was trying to make a good impression, and that if she continued to talk about things from her own imaginary world, he would run away eventually. The other guys were like this without expression.
   
Like for example, if other guys would say to her,
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Like for expression, if other guys would say to her,
   
 
“Hey hey, do you have time now? Let’s go out to play.”
 
“Hey hey, do you have time now? Let’s go out to play.”

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