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“Onee-chan, tell me more!”
 
“Onee-chan, tell me more!”
   
Ikumi would always prompt her to talk about it. She knew that her sister was worried about her.
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Ikumi would always prompt her to talk me. She knew that her sister was worried about her.
   
 
Worried that she still had inter-personal problems.
 
Worried that she still had inter-personal problems.
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Her sister was always so worried.
 
Her sister was always so worried.
   
‘You hate people.’ That’s how the sister would describe Asami, but to Asami, it was a little different.
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‘You hate humans.’ That’s how the sister would describe Asami, but to Asami, it was a little different.
   
She’s just not good with others.
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She’s just not good with humans.
   
 
Asami wasn’t really good with building relationships with others on the surface.
 
Asami wasn’t really good with building relationships with others on the surface.
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She liked to listen to her sister Ikumi talk about these unnecessary things. To be honest, what shocked Ikumi was that Asami was very clear about her sister’s relationships with her friends, and also, she understood her classmates’ personalities, standpoints, history and so on.
 
She liked to listen to her sister Ikumi talk about these unnecessary things. To be honest, what shocked Ikumi was that Asami was very clear about her sister’s relationships with her friends, and also, she understood her classmates’ personalities, standpoints, history and so on.
   
It’s not that she didn’t care about others. She was really interested in them. However,
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It’s not that she didn’t care about humans. She’s really interested in them. However,
   
 
Once she got involved, she couldn’t take it.
 
Once she got involved, she couldn’t take it.
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After they reached their youth, the difference in personalities between her and her sister became more obvious, and Asami tried her best to correct her personality…
 
After they reached their youth, the difference in personalities between her and her sister became more obvious, and Asami tried her best to correct her personality…
   
Even though she felt anxious about that, but this was a major reason why she agreed to go to Dean’s Land. Asami was still fearful about personal relationships, but she would often take part in class activities or social events, and she chose the tea ceremony club because she hoped to use one one one communication to improve her interaction ability.
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Even though she felt anxious about that, but this was a major reason why she agreed to go to Dean’s Land. Asami was still fearful about human relationships, but she would often take part in class activities or social events, and she chose the tea ceremony club because she hoped to use one one one communication to improve her interaction ability.
   
 
But in fact.
 
But in fact.
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After she got off the bus a walked down a gradual downhill slope, she looked around and found the meet-up location. There was a stern-looking male bronze statue beside the entrance, and 2 people were already standing there.
 
After she got off the bus a walked down a gradual downhill slope, she looked around and found the meet-up location. There was a stern-looking male bronze statue beside the entrance, and 2 people were already standing there.
   
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Arre?
Huh?
 
   
 
Ikumi and Katsuragi-kun aren’t here yet?
 
Ikumi and Katsuragi-kun aren’t here yet?
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Her entire family was extremely rich.
 
Her entire family was extremely rich.
   
Ever since she was young, she had nothing to worry about. She had full-time maids and butlers, which would be unbelievably rare in modern Japan, a chauffeur, bodyguards and specialized chefs. Also, there were Japanese and western food.
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Ever since young, she had nothing to worry about. She had full-time maids and butlers, which would be unbelievably rare in modern Japan, a chauffeur, bodyguards and specialized chefs. Also, there were Japanese and western food.
   
Ever since she was young, she had 4 outstanding home tutors taking turns to teach her. Her garden's really bad, and German Shepherds would be released at night.
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Ever since young, she had 4 outstanding home tutors taking turns to teach her. Her garden's really bad, and German Shepherds would be released at night.
   
 
There was also a large lake.
 
There was also a large lake.
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During the storm of Minus Checks.
 
During the storm of Minus Checks.
   
She used her imagination that spread her wings out in this situation. Most of the source of this imagination was from the current books or manga she had.
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She used her imagination that spread her wings out in this situation. Most of the source of this imagination were mostly from the current books or manga she had.
   
 
She had secretly bought a lot, hid them and browsed through them.
 
She had secretly bought a lot, hid them and browsed through them.

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