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Katsuragi Keima led the way, and the girl was fidgeting somewhat, and she said with a stiff voice to hide it,
 
Katsuragi Keima led the way, and the girl was fidgeting somewhat, and she said with a stiff voice to hide it,
   
“He, hey, Katsuragi! Where are you bringing me? I, I’ll say these bold words first. I’ll refuse if you want to do anything bold to me! I’ll really refuse you! We have to go in order.
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“He, hey, Katsuragi! Where are you bringing me to? I, I’ll say these bold words first. I’ll refuse if you want to do anything bold to me! I’ll really refuse you! We have to go in order.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Katsuragi Keima sighed loudly.
 
Katsuragi Keima sighed loudly.
   
“I see. Thinking through it carefully… maybe I should have realized it. I thought it through and thought that the girl with a wandering spirit would have some problems. And because of that, I was searching a girl without problems for problems. After clearing the smokescreen, it wasn’t even a dual character.”
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“I see. Thinking through it carefully… maybe I should have realized it. I had a direct thought-through and thought that the girl with a wandering spirit would have some problems. And because of that, I was searching a girl without problems for problems. After clearing the smokescreen, it wasn’t even a dual character.”
   
 
He shrugged his shoulders.
 
He shrugged his shoulders.
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He grimaced.
 
He grimaced.
   
“Elsie, there wouldn't have been this problem if you had followed me after school. I wouldn’t have been bothered by such a low-level trick…well, the reason why I put you in charge of Amami Tooru was because you were the only one who could detect runaway spirits.”
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“Elsie, there wouldn’t be this problem if you had followed me after school. I wouldn’t have been bothered by such a low-level trick…well, the reason why I put you in charge of Amami Tooru was because you’re the only one who could detect runaway spirits.”
   
 
He sighed.
 
He sighed.
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Keima glanced at the girl.
 
Keima glanced at the girl.
   
“Fuu…‘what do you want?’. Actually, that's my line. Well, it doesn’t matter. I can roughly guess why you wanted to do this. So just confess, you’re not Yoshino Asami.”
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“Fuu…‘what do you want?’. Actually, that was my line. Well, it doesn’t matter. I can roughly guess why you wanted to do this. So just confess, you’re not Yoshino Asami.”
   
 
“!”
 
“!”
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“Eh?”
 
“Eh?”
   
“I asked her ‘do you have a twin sister?’. And, the request was ‘don’t tell your sister what I asked you today when you get home, but you can follow whatever else she says’.”
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“I asked her if ‘you had a twin sister?’. Then, it was ‘don’t tell your sister what I asked you today when you got home, but you can follow whatever else she says’.”
   
 
Yoshino Ikumi widened her eyes. Keima then said.
 
Yoshino Ikumi widened her eyes. Keima then said.
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“You’ll tell me, right? Tell me about your sister’s troubles, Yoshino Ikumi. That’s why you approached me, right? If it’s me.”
 
“You’ll tell me, right? Tell me about your sister’s troubles, Yoshino Ikumi. That’s why you approached me, right? If it’s me.”
   
Keima said confidently.
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Keima said confidentally.
   
 
“I’ll definitely save your sister. I can do it.”
 
“I’ll definitely save your sister. I can do it.”
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About her sister’s situation.
 
About her sister’s situation.
   
“Onee-chan, she really hates people.”
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“Onee-chan, she really hates humans.”
   
 
She said such a shocking thing so easily, took a deep breath, exhaled greatly, and looked at Keima.
 
She said such a shocking thing so easily, took a deep breath, exhaled greatly, and looked at Keima.
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“It’s not just an expression.”
 
“It’s not just an expression.”
   
She said to Keima, who in turn nodded his head.
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She said to Keima, who in turn nodded her head.
   
 
“I know.”
 
“I know.”
   
“Aren’t you surprised? This onee-chan of mine looks so ‘ordinary’, so approachable, doesn’t have any special characteristics and looks so well-behaved hates others, you know?”
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“Aren’t you surprised? This onee-chan of mine looks so ‘ordinary’, so approachable, doesn’t have any special characteristics and looks so well-behaved hates humans, you know?”
   
 
“Why?”
 
“Why?”
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Keima similarly asked back.
 
Keima similarly asked back.
   
“Is there something to be shocked if she merely hates people? And,”
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“Is there something to be shocked if she merely hates humans? And,”
   
 
He showed a knowledgeable expression as he added,
 
He showed a knowledgeable expression as he added,
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Yoshino Ikumi hurriedly turned to look at Keima.
 
Yoshino Ikumi hurriedly turned to look at Keima.
   
“I guess you can tell from the time you were with me, but I like people! I like being with others! I have lots of friends, I like school, and I’m really happy to talk with Katsuragi-kun now. But,”
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“I guess you can tell from the time you were with me, but I like humans! I like being with humans! I have lots of friends, I like school, and I’m really happy to talk with Katsuragi-kun now. But,”
   
 
She sighed,
 
She sighed,
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Keima remained silent. Yoshino Ikumi continued on,
 
Keima remained silent. Yoshino Ikumi continued on,
   
“But onee-chan, she’s the complete opposite of me. She hates others, hates gatherings, hates being with people, and a school with lots of people is something that depressed her. Interacting with people and being with them would cause her to feel like she’s suffering.
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“But onee-chan, she’s the complete opposite of me. She hates humans, hates gatherings, hates being with people, and a school with lots of people is something that depressed her. Interacting with people and being with them would cause her to feel like she’s suffering.
   
 
Keima thought.
 
Keima thought.
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Keima plainly stated.
 
Keima plainly stated.
   
“I...”
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“I.”
   
 
He stated casually,
 
He stated casually,
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Yoshino Ikumi continued to stare at Keima silently for a while, and then sighed in the same manner, looked forward and said,
 
Yoshino Ikumi continued to stare at Keima silently for a while, and then sighed in the same manner, looked forward and said,
   
“Un, that’s how the case is. I don’t know how you knew this, Katsuragi-kun, but it’s just as you said. Onee-chan was always envious of me, but it seemed to have become even more intense. ‘Let alone you, Ikumi…I guess I want to be a girl who can interact with others too’—that was what she said. We, well, I guess that’s it. She felt even more bothered after liking you, Katsuragi-kun, I guess. Maybe she thought this way because she wanted to be on good relations with you?”
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“Un, that’s how the case is. I don’t know how you knew this, Katsuragi-kun, but it’s just as you said. Onee-chan was always envious of me, but it seemed to have become even more intense. ‘Let alone you, Ikumi…I guess I want to be a girl who can interact with others too’—that was what she said. We, well, I guess that’s it. She felt even more bothered after liking you, Katsuragi-kun, I guess. Maybe she thought this way because she wanted to on good relations with you?”
   
 
“…
 
“…
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Yoshino Ikumi laughed stiffly.
 
Yoshino Ikumi laughed stiffly.
   
“That’s right, that’s completely right. Onee-chan joined the tea ceremony club because of this reason. Onee-chan had been worried about her personality and wanted to correct it, correct how she hated others. Thus, she would try to join gatherings, and would even work hard to participate in club activities.
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“That’s right, that’s completely right. Onee-chan joined the tea ceremony club because of this reason. Onee-chan had been worried about her personality and wanted to correct it, correct how she hated humans. Thus, she would try to join gatherings, and would even work hard to participate in club activities.
   
 
“…”
 
“…”
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Yoshino Ikumi grabbed Keima’s hand.
 
Yoshino Ikumi grabbed Keima’s hand.
   
“Please! How can we cure her? What should we do to make onee-chan more sociable?”
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“Please! How can we cure here? What should we do to make onee-chan more sociable?”
   
 
Her eyes were full of trust in the almighty insight of Keima.
 
Her eyes were full of trust in the almighty insight of Keima.
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Yoshino Asami was invited by her younger sister Ikumi, who just returned home.
 
Yoshino Asami was invited by her younger sister Ikumi, who just returned home.
   
“My friends and I will be going to Dean Land tomorrow. You want to come along, onee-chan?”
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“My friends and I will be going to Dean Land tomorrow. You you want to come along, onee-chan?”
   
 
Of course, Yoshino Asami wasn’t really interested. However, the younger sister said,
 
Of course, Yoshino Asami wasn’t really interested. However, the younger sister said,
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“Well, I feel that it’s a good training for you as you try to get along with others well, onee-chan.”
 
“Well, I feel that it’s a good training for you as you try to get along with others well, onee-chan.”
   
Then, she added an ‘and also’ which shook Yoshino Asami’s heart.
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Also, she added a ‘and also’, which shook Yoshino Asami’s heart.
   
 
“Katsuragi-kun’s coming along too, that Katsuragi Keima-kun onee-chan often mentioned.”
 
“Katsuragi-kun’s coming along too, that Katsuragi Keima-kun onee-chan often mentioned.”
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“Onee-chan, tell me more!”
 
“Onee-chan, tell me more!”
   
Ikumi would always prompt her to talk about it. She knew that her sister was worried about her.
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Ikumi would always prompt her to talk me. She knew that her sister was worried about her.
   
 
Worried that she still had inter-personal problems.
 
Worried that she still had inter-personal problems.
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Her sister was always so worried.
 
Her sister was always so worried.
   
‘You hate people.’ That’s how the sister would describe Asami, but to Asami, it was a little different.
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‘You hate humans.’ That’s how the sister would describe Asami, but to Asami, it was a little different.
   
She’s just not good with others.
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She’s just not good with humans.
   
 
Asami wasn’t really good with building relationships with others on the surface.
 
Asami wasn’t really good with building relationships with others on the surface.
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She liked to listen to her sister Ikumi talk about these unnecessary things. To be honest, what shocked Ikumi was that Asami was very clear about her sister’s relationships with her friends, and also, she understood her classmates’ personalities, standpoints, history and so on.
 
She liked to listen to her sister Ikumi talk about these unnecessary things. To be honest, what shocked Ikumi was that Asami was very clear about her sister’s relationships with her friends, and also, she understood her classmates’ personalities, standpoints, history and so on.
   
It’s not that she didn’t care about others. She was really interested in them. However,
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It’s not that she didn’t care about humans. She’s really interested in them. However,
   
 
Once she got involved, she couldn’t take it.
 
Once she got involved, she couldn’t take it.
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She herself.
 
She herself.
   
Couldn’t do it. Once she got involved, she felt like she would crumble. How should she put it? It’s like the harmonious balance would collapse once it enters ‘her’. She would not know how to react, and would then feel uncomfortable, and then her body would feel uncomfortable. Thus, other people thought that ‘onee-chan hated humans’ as a response.
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Couldn’t do it. Once she got involved, she felt like she would crumble. How should she put it? It’s like the harmonious balance would collapse once it enters ‘her’. She would not know how to react, and would then feel uncomfortable, and then her body would feel uncomfortable. Thus, human thought that ‘onee-chan hated humans’ as a response.
   
 
Also,
 
Also,
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After they reached their youth, the difference in personalities between her and her sister became more obvious, and Asami tried her best to correct her personality…
 
After they reached their youth, the difference in personalities between her and her sister became more obvious, and Asami tried her best to correct her personality…
   
Even though she felt anxious about that, but this was a major reason why she agreed to go to Dean’s Land. Asami was still fearful about personal relationships, but she would often take part in class activities or social events, and she chose the tea ceremony club because she hoped to use one one one communication to improve her interaction ability.
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Even though she felt anxious about that, but this was a major reason why she agreed to go to Dean’s Land. Asami was still fearful about human relationships, but she would often take part in class activities or social events, and she chose the tea ceremony club because she hoped to use one one one communication to improve her interaction ability.
   
 
But in fact.
 
But in fact.
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After she got off the bus a walked down a gradual downhill slope, she looked around and found the meet-up location. There was a stern-looking male bronze statue beside the entrance, and 2 people were already standing there.
 
After she got off the bus a walked down a gradual downhill slope, she looked around and found the meet-up location. There was a stern-looking male bronze statue beside the entrance, and 2 people were already standing there.
   
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Arre?
Huh?
 
   
 
Ikumi and Katsuragi-kun aren’t here yet?
 
Ikumi and Katsuragi-kun aren’t here yet?
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“Un…it’s nice to download this morning breakfast event, but the voice recognition device still can’t work. This will be bad for conquest. Got to let the manufacturer correct it. Hm?”
 
“Un…it’s nice to download this morning breakfast event, but the voice recognition device still can’t work. This will be bad for conquest. Got to let the manufacturer correct it. Hm?”
   
At this moment, Keima finally noticed that Yoshino Asami was staring at him blankly. After glancing at her, the first thing Keima said was,
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At this moment, Keima finally noticed that Yoshino Asami was staring at her blankly. After glancing at her, the first thing Keima said was,
   
 
“Hey, you’re here?”
 
“Hey, you’re here?”
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“…I don’t feel like changing clothes. What about you?”
 
“…I don’t feel like changing clothes. What about you?”
   
(This is a facility that only allows access after getting into cosplay.)
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(This is a facility that only allows access after getting into cosplay.
   
 
Yoshino Asami blinked her eyes and blushed.
 
Yoshino Asami blinked her eyes and blushed.
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“This so-called uniform has huge problems!”
 
“This so-called uniform has huge problems!”
   
He complained to the workers of Dean Land, and then said meticulously,
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He complained to the workers of Dean Land, and then sad meticulously,
   
 
“Then, remove the scarf here, and that should be all. There should be gold thread used to make prince clothing, right? It would look more like a student from Neville Academy.”
 
“Then, remove the scarf here, and that should be all. There should be gold thread used to make prince clothing, right? It would look more like a student from Neville Academy.”
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She didn’t mean for this to happen, but that her body was saying its own thing and responding in such a manner. Keima blushed slightly as well, but never ever rejected Yoshino Asami.
 
She didn’t mean for this to happen, but that her body was saying its own thing and responding in such a manner. Keima blushed slightly as well, but never ever rejected Yoshino Asami.
   
She would cry at one moment and make a ruckus at the next moment. The four people finally finished this one-of-a-kind facility, and Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi seemed like they really enjoyed it.
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She would cry at one moment and make a ruckus at the next moment. The four people finally finished this one-of-its-kind facility, and Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi seemed like they really enjoyed it.
   
 
After completing everything, they changed back into their own clothes inside the changing room. Even after walking for quite a while from the haunted house, Yoshino Asami’s heart was still beating wildly.
 
After completing everything, they changed back into their own clothes inside the changing room. Even after walking for quite a while from the haunted house, Yoshino Asami’s heart was still beating wildly.
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On hearing this, Yoshino Ikumi said,
 
On hearing this, Yoshino Ikumi said,
   
“I got it! So we’re going to get onee-chan to get used to it in steps, right? First, Katsuragi-kun, then, us, and finally, the rest. In that case, even onee-chan who’s not used to group gatherings can ease her burden a little~I see. As expected of Katsuragi-kun!”
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“I got it! So we’re going to get onee-chan to get used in steps, right? First, Katsuragi-kun, then, us, and finally, the rest. In that case, even onee-chan who’s not used to group gatherings can ease her burden a little~I see. As expected of Katsuragi-kun!”
   
 
She said that in amazement. Elsie also said,
 
She said that in amazement. Elsie also said,
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They were split into two teams in a competition.
 
They were split into two teams in a competition.
   
Right now, the competition was intense. Teammates were high-fiving with each other, and it was really bustling. Then, everyone was having tea inside Dean Land and chatting away.
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Right now, the competition was intense. Teammates were high touching with each other, and it was really bustling. Then, everyone was having tea inside Dean Land and chatting away.
   
 
Excluding Yoshino Ikumi, who recruited everyone, they all met for the first time. However, everyone got together rather well, and the boys and girls with quite the good personalities didn’t seem to show any estrangement. Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi were laughing from start to end, and the important Yoshino Asami looked rather ‘normal’ as she blended in.
 
Excluding Yoshino Ikumi, who recruited everyone, they all met for the first time. However, everyone got together rather well, and the boys and girls with quite the good personalities didn’t seem to show any estrangement. Elsie and Yoshino Ikumi were laughing from start to end, and the important Yoshino Asami looked rather ‘normal’ as she blended in.
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Yoshino Asami was stunned. Keima continued to walk down the stairs and say,
 
Yoshino Asami was stunned. Keima continued to walk down the stairs and say,
   
“I had been observing you, trying to know you. You’ve been forcing yourself, right? Is it really that important to talk and joke around with others? Was there a need to chat happily with others? Do you have to worry about being left out in a friendly group? Ha! That’s stupid! Watch a person’s mood? Why do you have to observe a person’s mood? Atmosphere? Just let it be messy if it’s messed up! What’s so bad about being haughty? Just being alone! If that suited you, be proud of your own solitude! Don’t be lost, Yoshino Asami!”
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“I had been observing you, trying to know you. You’ve been forcing yourself, right? Is it really that important to talk and joke around with others? Was there a need to chat happily with others? Do you have to worry about being left out in a friendly group? Ha! That’s stupid! Watch a person’s modd? Why do you have to observe a person’s mood? Atmosphere? Just let it be messy if it’s messed up! What’s so bad about being haughty? Just being alone! If that suited you, be proud of your own solitude! Don’t be lost, Yoshino Asami!”
   
 
Yoshino Asami immediately understood.
 
Yoshino Asami immediately understood.
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Keima’s eyes were showing sincere light.
 
Keima’s eyes were showing sincere light.
   
Perhaps it was concern for the girl who seemed similar to him but was in fact not. He said,
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Perhaps it was concern for the girl who seemed similar to her but was in fact not. He said,
   
 
“Aren’t they here? Don’t you have a sister who’s thinking of you no matter what? Who says that you can’t live normally with people?”
 
“Aren’t they here? Don’t you have a sister who’s thinking of you no matter what? Who says that you can’t live normally with people?”
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“!”
 
“!”
   
The ‘Denpakei’ girl, Amami Tooru was standing there.
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The ‘Denpaki’ girl, Amami Tooru was standing there.
   
   
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Her entire family was extremely rich.
 
Her entire family was extremely rich.
   
Ever since she was young, she had nothing to worry about. She had full-time maids and butlers, which would be unbelievably rare in modern Japan, a chauffeur, bodyguards and specialized chefs. Also, there were Japanese and western food.
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Ever since young, she had nothing to worry about. She had full-time maids and butlers, which would be unbelievably rare in modern Japan, a chauffeur, bodyguards and specialized chefs. Also, there were Japanese and western food.
   
Ever since she was young, she had 4 outstanding home tutors taking turns to teach her. Her garden's really bad, and German Shepherds would be released at night.
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Ever since young, she had 4 outstanding home tutors taking turns to teach her. Her garden's really bad, and German Shepherds would be released at night.
   
 
There was also a large lake.
 
There was also a large lake.
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Like for example, being smacked lightly on the hand.
 
Like for example, being smacked lightly on the hand.
   
“When my mom did this to me back when I was young, I really hated her for it, but now, I’m really grateful to her for training me to be such a refined lady.”
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“When my mom did this to me back when I was young, I really hated for it, but now, I’m really grateful to her for training me to be such a refined lady.”
   
 
Her mother would emphasize this in a teary manner.
 
Her mother would emphasize this in a teary manner.
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During the storm of Minus Checks.
 
During the storm of Minus Checks.
   
She used her imagination that spread her wings out in this situation. Most of the source of this imagination was from the current books or manga she had.
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She used her imagination that spread her wings out in this situation. Most of the source of this imagination were mostly from the current books or manga she had.
   
 
She had secretly bought a lot, hid them and browsed through them.
 
She had secretly bought a lot, hid them and browsed through them.
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“Because I’m an angel!”
 
“Because I’m an angel!”
   
That’s what she really thought back then,
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That’s what she really thought back that,
   
 
“So I have to save him!”
 
“So I have to save him!”
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She really felt like playing tricks on him.
 
She really felt like playing tricks on him.
   
Thus, she continued to act an angel. She felt that the boy was trying to make a good impression, and that if she continued to talk about things from her own imaginary world, he would run away eventually. The other guys were like this without exception.
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Thus, she continued to act an angel. She felt that the boy was trying to make a good impression, and that if she continued to talk about things from her own imaginary world, he would run away eventually. The other guys were like this without expression.
   
Like for example, if other guys would say to her,
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Like for expression, if other guys would say to her,
   
 
“Hey hey, do you have time now? Let’s go out to play.”
 
“Hey hey, do you have time now? Let’s go out to play.”
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She found a cute girl with him, and the shock she had was so huge that it was far more than what she expected. So, that’s how it was, she thought.
 
She found a cute girl with him, and the shock she had was so huge that it was far more than what she expected. So, that’s how it was, she thought.
   
As expected, he was just a guy who really liked girls.
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As expected, she was just a guy who really liked girls.
   
 
Maybe it was just out of interest that he went out with her, and she really couldn’t take it as she hurriedly left. That day, for the entire day, she was really restless.
 
Maybe it was just out of interest that he went out with her, and she really couldn’t take it as she hurriedly left. That day, for the entire day, she was really restless.
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The boy was kissing another girl…
 
The boy was kissing another girl…
   
Nothing else really mattered then.
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Nothing else really matter then.
   
   
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He stretched his delicate hand out.
 
He stretched his delicate hand out.
   
“…To save a princess who’s bound by such a minus mark.”
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“…To save a princess who’s bound by such a minor mark.”
   
 
A beat later,
 
A beat later,

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