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=== Part 2 === |
=== Part 2 === |
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− | When the bell rang, the three of us stood up and decided to go to the cafeteria. I forgot to make a lunchbox and I was starving, so I |
+ | When the bell rang, the three of us stood up and decided to go to the cafeteria. I forgot to make a lunchbox and I was starving, so I need to buy something to eat. Ryo saved the day by offering to show me the cafeteria. Kouma had brought her lunch from home, but she insisted in coming with us (and I'm betting that she doesn't want me to be alone with Ryo) instead of going directly to the rooftop, where they told me they usually eat. We were just about to leave class when... |
"Koukishin-kun, come here for a minute." |
"Koukishin-kun, come here for a minute." |
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...our teacher decided to talk to me. |
...our teacher decided to talk to me. |
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+ | I look around to tell the girls to wait for me, but they had already vanished. |
"Yes..." I said, and then remembered that I was in Japan and honorifics were the thin line between being polite or not. Which was probably the reason my teacher was staring at me with that evil look in her eyes. "...sensei?" |
"Yes..." I said, and then remembered that I was in Japan and honorifics were the thin line between being polite or not. Which was probably the reason my teacher was staring at me with that evil look in her eyes. "...sensei?" |
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"Good." She waved her hand and her gaze went back to the notebooks on her desk. "Dismissed." |
"Good." She waved her hand and her gaze went back to the notebooks on her desk. "Dismissed." |
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− | I bowed and walked out of the room. Ryo and Kouma were waiting for me |
+ | I bowed and walked out of the room. Ryo and Kouma were waiting for me on the hall, but after seeing my face they must have decided that it wasn't a good moment to ask about my conversation with our teacher. |
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+ | "GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" |
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− | "GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!" |
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− | As I screamed after being completely silent for several minutes, the birds on the rooftop flew away and the world seemed to stop moving. It was almost a cinematographic scene, but I didn't |
+ | As I screamed after being completely silent for several minutes, the birds on the rooftop flew away and the world seemed to stop moving. It was almost a cinematographic scene, but I didn't felt like I was going to get a golden statuette for demonstrating my despair in public. |
− | Since I used all the air in my lungs, it took me a while to |
+ | Since I used all the air in my lungs, it took me a while to regularize my breathing. Kouma and Ryo just looked at me with curiosity in their eyes, but they did not seem shocked. |
"...I guess I'm ready to talk now." |
"...I guess I'm ready to talk now." |
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− | I |
+ | I sit down, calmer than I was a few seconds ago but still full of tension. |
“Go on, it will be good for you. Talk to us." Ryo said but quickly corrected herself after looking at Kouma, whose attention seemed to be completely drawn to her Udon. "Talk to me."<br> |
“Go on, it will be good for you. Talk to us." Ryo said but quickly corrected herself after looking at Kouma, whose attention seemed to be completely drawn to her Udon. "Talk to me."<br> |
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− | "Reikoku-sensei will pay me a home visit tonight, but |
+ | "Reikoku-sensei will pay me a home visit tonight, but haven't unpacked yet and there is so much to do that I don't think I could do it if I skipped classes." I sighed, hopeless. "Which is probably what I'm going to do."<br> |
"You shouldn't skip classes, Shin-tsu!" Ryo seemed genuinely angry. "It's your first day at school!"<br> |
"You shouldn't skip classes, Shin-tsu!" Ryo seemed genuinely angry. "It's your first day at school!"<br> |
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No, not really. And it's not like I did it just for fun(not entirely, anyway); there's a lot to do and I certainly need all the help I can get. So, my ends justify my means(especially when it's fun). |
No, not really. And it's not like I did it just for fun(not entirely, anyway); there's a lot to do and I certainly need all the help I can get. So, my ends justify my means(especially when it's fun). |
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− | We kept quiet for the rest of the meal, mostly because I knew that if I looked at Ryo's face at that moment we would start laughing and ruin everything up. |
+ | We kept quiet for the rest of the meal, mostly because I knew that if I looked at Ryo's face at that moment we would start laughing and ruin everything up. Then we suppressed the laughs that wanted to be set free, ate and went back to class. |
=== Part 3 === |
=== Part 3 === |