Talk:Toradora!:Volume3 Chapter1

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"I'll take this chance to tell you clearly I'm just clearly stating the circumstances but,"

This line is not very clear. I could put "that" between "clearly" and "I'm" to make it grammatically correct, but the sentence would still sound weird.

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"Dangerous—with the typical instinct fear, Ryuuji’s stomach twisted in knots."

Also unclear. I'd wager a guess, but I don't want to get it wrong.

Akirasav

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Sorry, I made the last two edits. Didn't realize I wasn't logged in. ~Dan