Talk:The Longing Of Shiina Ryo:Volume1 Chapter 3: Kouma

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another interesting novel introduced to us by our very own BAkA-TSUKI>>>>> which coincidentally sounds like Baka-Suki which means Idiot Love :3


Edit explanation:

  • "didn't saw" -> "didn't see": in "didn't/don't X" the X should always be in the infinitive.
  • "make she waste her energy" -> "make her waste her energy": syntactically that's the object of "make", not the subject of "waste", even though semantically it's both.
  • "fight back Mystery" -> "fight back against Mystery": "fight" can have a direct object, but "fight back" can't. It can either be used intransitively, or if you want to specify a target then attach it with a preposition.
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