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'''Bold text'''"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT) |
'''Bold text'''"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--[[User:Vu.P|Vu.P]] ([[User talk:Vu.P|talk]]) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT) |
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| + | I changed HE to SHE on page 127 because the original text was general neutral and the magician whose name was not mentioned is female. [[User:Sashiko|Sashiko]] ([[User talk:Sashiko|talk]]) 19:52, 23 July 2013 (CDT) |
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Revision as of 02:52, 24 July 2013
Bold text"Turning towards Mayumi revealing a little grunt of disgust, Katsuto giggles." This sentence really bothered me since I can't imagine a guy like Katsuto giggling. Would it be possible to substitute giggling with chuckling?--Vu.P (talk) 12:10, 23 July 2013 (CDT)
I changed HE to SHE on page 127 because the original text was general neutral and the magician whose name was not mentioned is female. Sashiko (talk) 19:52, 23 July 2013 (CDT)
