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== Volume 14, chapter 1 editing questions == |
== Volume 14, chapter 1 editing questions == |
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− | Towards the beginning of the chapter there is a sentence that reads |
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What was added was not only overhead tracks where small-scale compact train-type public transportation facilities [Cabinets] run through. Apart from that new stuff, traditional stuff and various facilities large and small were added to the town scenery. A [large temple on top of a small hill], Kyuuchouji, was one of them. |
What was added was not only overhead tracks where small-scale compact train-type public transportation facilities [Cabinets] run through. Apart from that new stuff, traditional stuff and various facilities large and small were added to the town scenery. A [large temple on top of a small hill], Kyuuchouji, was one of them. |
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My question is what exactly is the "stuff" that is being referred to? My initial thought on editing this sentence is to change it to read; |
My question is what exactly is the "stuff" that is being referred to? My initial thought on editing this sentence is to change it to read; |
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What was added was not only overhead tracks with small-scale compact train-type public transportation [Cabinets] running through. In addition to that new infrastructure, traditional infrastructure and buildings large and small were added to the town scenery. A [large temple on top of a small hill], Kyuuchouji, was one of them. |
What was added was not only overhead tracks with small-scale compact train-type public transportation [Cabinets] running through. In addition to that new infrastructure, traditional infrastructure and buildings large and small were added to the town scenery. A [large temple on top of a small hill], Kyuuchouji, was one of them. |
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