Talk:Baka to Tesuto to Syokanju:Volume1 The First Question

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I'm not an official editor, but I'm looking to do more of it, and I did some minor typo fixes and changes to make it "flow" better. I have some questions/comments though:

"A sport type guy with light dark skin and short hair was standing there."

What is 'light dark skin'? Did you mean 'medium tone,' 'lightly tanned' or something like that?

I was thinking tanned because of this line later on:

“Ah, I am sorry. Err...Your skin is very dark today as well.”

“Yoshii, you should be glad right? My opinion is really correct.”

This sentence confuses me. At the point the teacher says this, does he already know the result of the test? Otherwise, how would he know he was correct? And why would Yoshii be glad that he was put in class F?

I know it's a big list, but I wasn't sure if I could make such big changes as just a random contributor. I made a good amount of smaller ones, but wanted to double check the bigger ones. I would like to see the translator or editor's opinion on this.

chickenwing71x 00:50, 06 December 2008 (EST)

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