Talk:Ore no Imōto ga Konna ni Kawaii Wake ga Nai:Volume 1 Chapter 4

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"The moment she head my question, her cheeks went red, and started shaking." I believe theres a typo and that and that "head" should have been "heard".
Also "Go ahead... My parent teachings to you can wait." needs to be placed on a new line. --Lighthalzen 19:23, 16 October 2010 (UTC)

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Alright, fixed the stuff mentioned above as well as another 10 or so of the biggest grammatical problem areas. All in all, the changes are still pretty minor though. It's nice to see the conclusion of the first volume finally! LoliSauce 03:11, 17 October 2010 (UTC)