Talk:Mahouka Koukou no Rettousei:Volume 2 Chapter 9

Greetings, Dreyakis-san. I wanted to ask about this line:
-On the other hand, if the situation involved people he knew -- Tatsuya was also a student at First High, it was improbable for him to know absolutely no one -- and attempted to deceive or entice them, he would not remain idle.-
I know that this is very minor, but can I change the last sentence to -and if there's any attempt to deceive or entice them, then he would not remain idle.- ? Thanks before.-/-User753-Talk- 11:58, 25 August 2012 (CDT)