Talk:Kokoro Connect:Volume 1 Chapter 3

Seeing the peril of Kiriyama's personality entering [Aoki's body], Aoki's personality entering [Nagase's body] 
and Nagase's personality entering [Kiriyama's body], the whole literature club decided to skip the first lesson together. 

it should be

Seeing the peril of Kiriyama's personality entering [Aoki's body], Aoki's personality entering [Inaba's body] 
and Inaba's personality entering [Kiriyama's body], the whole literature club decided to skip the first lesson together.

desu yo ne?~

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I've begun to notice that they way the author describes dialogue *after* the person has spoken to be quite confusing, as its done in a way that makes you think that he's talking about the following line rather than the previous. i.e.

"So...I say, these aren't the things that you should do...I am not planning to oppose any one of you...this is true...but I don't want to be friends with you either...Oh, it's better if I didn't say it."
«Balloon Vine», who seemed to be bothered by Inaba, turned slightly back then plainly spoke to her. 
"Don't act like everything will go as you wish!" 
Inaba used even more strength to try to make «Balloon Vine» turn back. 

--Michpig (talk) 14:16, 21 September 2012 (CDT)