Talk:Chrome Shelled Regios:Volume1 Prologue

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"Besides which, Nina understood it wasn’t possible anyone in the safe was safe." Is "safe" suppose to be city? Just making sure. Thanks.


"Nina’s line of sight became higher, and then the bus moved as if it was skipping." --> "Nina’s line of sight became higher and the bus began to move as if it was skipping."

I want to change it to that sentence but not sure if it would detract from meaning. Eschiver 16:04, 14 April 2009 (UTC) Eschiver


"Since it was no joke when the city moved, the driver and all the passengers could only wait in the small waiting area." The "no joke" part is vague. Does it mean "dangerous?" Eschiver 16:10, 14 April 2009 (UTC)Eschiver

"Layfon reached out a hand to steady Leerin on her shoulder." --> "Layfon reached out and placed his hand on Leerin's shoulder to steady her." Eschiver 16:16, 14 April 2009 (UTC)Eschiver


sorry it took me so long to find out about the discussion page function... anyway, thanks for fixing up the mistakes! I'll go and change the "no joke" part to "dangerous". - Blewin

I've been wondering for a while: What color is "tea colored hair"? Or "tea color" in general? (This is about the color of Layfon's hair)--Kadi 09:12, 15 April 2010 (UTC)

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