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- 06:17, 27 October 2011 diff hist -2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine corrected word
- 06:15, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine normal phrasing
- 06:14, 27 October 2011 diff hist -3 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine extraneous word
- 06:10, 27 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine "underway" doesn't make sense; "by the time" implies duration, which is appropriate here
- 06:08, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine we normally wouldn't describe a house as "protrubing"
- 06:05, 27 October 2011 diff hist +91 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
- 06:04, 27 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine moved modifier to proper place
- 06:02, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine better rhythm
- 05:33, 27 October 2011 diff hist +162 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
- 05:32, 27 October 2011 diff hist +1 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine correct typo
- 05:22, 27 October 2011 diff hist +190 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine Question for translator
- 05:20, 27 October 2011 diff hist -5 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine removed typo
- 05:15, 27 October 2011 diff hist 0 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine changed to correct word
- 05:14, 27 October 2011 diff hist +4 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine added missing word
- 05:12, 27 October 2011 diff hist -8 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine fixed grammar
- 05:11, 27 October 2011 diff hist +4 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine made tense consistent
- 05:10, 27 October 2011 diff hist +9 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine got rid of et al again. If "and others" becomes to repetitive, maybe some could be changed to "and crew" or "and friends" or "and his cohorts"
- 05:08, 27 October 2011 diff hist -17 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine more natural phrasing
- 05:05, 27 October 2011 diff hist +2 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine changed to standard phrase
- 05:04, 27 October 2011 diff hist +5 m Gekkou:Volume 1 Orange & Wine read awkwardly, and wasn't logically true (if some random person in Iowa knew about the recipe, they'd still be acting friviously; it isn't important that nobody knew about it, only that they didn't know about it)