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There were no particularly special factors.
 
There were no particularly special factors.
   
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Only the number of small misfortunes stacked together.
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Only the a number of small misfortunes stacked together.
   
 
That was all.
 
That was all.
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Because everyone was dead and drained dry.
 
Because everyone was dead and drained dry.
   
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The dead bodies strewn around, looking like desiccated corpses, were completely drained to the last drop. This showed how insane the young man's "thirst" was.
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The dead bodies strewn around, looking like dessicated corpses, were completely drained to the last drop. This showed how insane the young man's "thirst" was.
   
 
Discovering an abnormal situation, the security guards came running over.
 
Discovering an abnormal situation, the security guards came running over.

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