Editing Shinmai Maou no Keiyakusha:Volume 2 Chapter 4

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"...Seems we're safe somehow..."
 
"...Seems we're safe somehow..."
   
Basara made a sigh of relief while still carrying her in his arms. Kurumi was enveloped by his voice that had became lower in the past five years and his grown body that overshadowed her while she was held.
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Basara made a sigh of relief while still carrying her in his arms. Kurumi was enveloped by his voice that had became lower in the past five years and his grown body that held her covering(tightly?).
   
 
''...Ah.''
 
''...Ah.''
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When Kurumi lowered her gaze on herself puzzled, she saw that her clothes were greatly torn on her right side, exposing her bare skin.
 
When Kurumi lowered her gaze on herself puzzled, she saw that her clothes were greatly torn on her right side, exposing her bare skin.
   
It reached from under the swelling of her breast up to near the tip of it.
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It reached from under the swelling of breasts up to near the tip of it.
   
 
"N- No...----!?"
 
"N- No...----!?"

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